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Array ( [sid] => 48707 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Written with Passion [time] => 2004-05-22 19:18:27 [hometext] => Wirtten about what I want be, and what I want to tell a girl, who might never know how much I need her. It was written as a song for my band, Avant Garde(sounds good when sung). [bodytext] => I wanna go out and grab this world by the balls and spit in it's face. I want everyone to love me and curse when they hear my name. I want to stop the Earth from spinning so I could freeze time. Forever with you I'd stay.
Maybe someday.
And I want. I need you to love me. I would forever be the best I could ever be. I can't stand to see you over there. With pretty eyes, and your orangey-red hair. Yes, I may be immortal, but without you would be eternal sadness. And I'm looking forward to hearing you say okay.
Maybe someday.
This is for all the times I've raised my cup. All the times I toasted to make the world a better place. All the times I fell asleep, with the image of your face. And I know somehow I will be with you. Not now, not today.
Maybe someday.
I know I'm gunna be somehting great. But I have so much emotion to spill. I now know I'm gunna get worse before I ever get better. ANd I know that you will always hold aplace in my heart. No matter what ever happens, I will make sure to see it through. That everything will be fantastic. I'll make it a romantic play.
Maybe someday.
Even with my hatred towards the world. I remain entranced with your oh so white-soft skin. And your quiet-swaggering beauty in which brings me to my knees. And makes me want to be a better person. Rather MAKES me a better person. ANd baby, I am writing this with passion, in hopes that I may show you everything I feel. Now I will wait for a time, wait for a sign. When maybe with me you can forever stay.
Maybe Someday


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Written with Passion

Contributed by -thesiscokid- on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 07:18:27 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



I wanna go out and grab this world by the balls and spit in it's face. I want everyone to love me and curse when they hear my name. I want to stop the Earth from spinning so I could freeze time. Forever with you I'd stay.
Maybe someday.
And I want. I need you to love me. I would forever be the best I could ever be. I can't stand to see you over there. With pretty eyes, and your orangey-red hair. Yes, I may be immortal, but without you would be eternal sadness. And I'm looking forward to hearing you say okay.
Maybe someday.
This is for all the times I've raised my cup. All the times I toasted to make the world a better place. All the times I fell asleep, with the image of your face. And I know somehow I will be with you. Not now, not today.
Maybe someday.
I know I'm gunna be somehting great. But I have so much emotion to spill. I now know I'm gunna get worse before I ever get better. ANd I know that you will always hold aplace in my heart. No matter what ever happens, I will make sure to see it through. That everything will be fantastic. I'll make it a romantic play.
Maybe someday.
Even with my hatred towards the world. I remain entranced with your oh so white-soft skin. And your quiet-swaggering beauty in which brings me to my knees. And makes me want to be a better person. Rather MAKES me a better person. ANd baby, I am writing this with passion, in hopes that I may show you everything I feel. Now I will wait for a time, wait for a sign. When maybe with me you can forever stay.
Maybe Someday






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Re: Written with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 07:30:46 PM AEST
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Probably a metal song with lyrics like that. If you love this person try not to be or show so much of an aggessive attitude, unless you know she likes that -most girls I know don't. In the immortal words of one of my favorite singers; "try a little tenderness"


Re: Written with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:17:03 PM AEST
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I agree w/ Archie... it is a good piece though...
~Donna~


Re: Written with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:29:52 PM AEST
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And very good write it is.
Personally I like as is but that's only my opinion.
Great job.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Written with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by carebear on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:54:19 PM AEST
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this was totally AWESOME,BEAUTIFUL,AMAZING...



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