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Array ( [sid] => 48637 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black Day [time] => 2004-05-22 08:18:50 [hometext] => Admitting I was suffering from depression last summer was so scary.I had never felt so low.Lately I've been doing better,picking myself up&finding things to be happy about.But since last night my heart is so full of sadness again for no obvious reason. [bodytext] => Black day
Delve in
Deep - right in the pit.
Head explodes
Paint the walls
With the contents
Of this hate.
Leave none untouched.
This demon pain
Colours and stains
Inside and out.
Turning,
Twisting,
Writhing again.
Agony has too many names
And a twin of fear.
Multiple birth spurts
Forth this feeling
To shade and blacken
Into the endless
Torture of night. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 65 [informant] => reilt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Black Day

Contributed by reilt on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:18:50 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Black day
Delve in
Deep - right in the pit.
Head explodes
Paint the walls
With the contents
Of this hate.
Leave none untouched.
This demon pain
Colours and stains
Inside and out.
Turning,
Twisting,
Writhing again.
Agony has too many names
And a twin of fear.
Multiple birth spurts
Forth this feeling
To shade and blacken
Into the endless
Torture of night.

Copyright © reilt ... [ 2004-05-22 08:18:50]
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Re: Black Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:32:45 AM AEST
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my dear! sooo sad and I understand. I have had these feelings as well.. i guess most of us knows.. but I found one thing with myself: cry out my pain and then "myself kick my own butt" as I do not wanna be down, searching for something lovely, and He helps.. wish I could help you more... Love, aika:-)

Re: Black Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:40:46 AM AEST
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Good stuff. Your writes are always so full of color and depth. You paint feelings. Hang in there. I have been in your place. The path out is worthwhile, but not easy.
Stitch

Re: Black Day (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:45:18 AM AEST
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I can understand how you fell.
I feel like that from time to time.
It's almost like worst then dieing.
By the way good write. :)

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