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it changed with a blink of the eye
somedays i wake up and wish i would have died
My goal in life was to be a professional skater
now it looks ill just be a hater
one car accident that changed my life
that made me wish that i could have used the knife
just to know that i'll never skate again
that ill never win
I should be happy i can walk...
but i really dont even care to talk
this is my life
something that changed in a blink of an eye. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 13 [informant] => inad [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Life

Contributed by inad on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 07:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My life isn't the greatest
it changed with a blink of the eye
somedays i wake up and wish i would have died
My goal in life was to be a professional skater
now it looks ill just be a hater
one car accident that changed my life
that made me wish that i could have used the knife
just to know that i'll never skate again
that ill never win
I should be happy i can walk...
but i really dont even care to talk
this is my life
something that changed in a blink of an eye.

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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 08:05:25 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Danielle. This is such a sad poem. I'm sorry if this is true, but you have to be thankful for life..and for your talent as a writer. Keep it up..things will look brighter.
Hugs,
Jenni

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 08:15:00 AM AEST
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Awww Dani hon you know it will get better...Life has ups and downs...some take longer to get fixed. But you know I am here for you hon..muahhh

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by inad on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 02:15:36 PM AEST
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thanks guys i know life has its ups and downs its better for me to write how i feel instead of thinking bad evil thoughts or even going through with them... i know one day i will skate again because im determined but the docter says i may never

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by herbleaf23 on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 05:42:20 PM AEST
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i'm all down with the poetry and stuff, but don't you think rhyming in the comments is taking it just a bit too far? maybe just a bit bizarre? oh well if you can't skate maybe you can race cars. or learn to play a guitar!

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