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Array ( [sid] => 48581 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So Please Tell Me [time] => 2004-05-21 20:38:31 [hometext] => This poem was just written about one of the guys who's been there for years... though trouble's found it's way to paradice [bodytext] => Sick of all these one sided lies
I wish you'd just tell me
What is going on
What are you thinking?
Stop saying that you want me
I won't wait around forever

So please tell me
What is it that you want?
Who do you choose to be with.
I'm sick of feeling like you don't
Even care about me.
My calls go unanswered.

So please tell me
Is there another who's stolen
Your heart away?
I know I've put you though crap
I'm forever sorry for hurting you

So please tell me
Shall I be forgiven for it all
Or is there already someone else?
My tears fall for you
lost and afraid, have I lost?

So please tell me,
Do you want me to be yours?
Is there someone else?
Have I lost you forever?
So please tell me
the answers to my questions. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 50 [informant] => vampiricsuccubus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

So Please Tell Me

Contributed by vampiricsuccubus on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 08:38:31 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

Sick of all these one sided lies
I wish you'd just tell me
What is going on
What are you thinking?
Stop saying that you want me
I won't wait around forever

So please tell me
What is it that you want?
Who do you choose to be with.
I'm sick of feeling like you don't
Even care about me.
My calls go unanswered.

So please tell me
Is there another who's stolen
Your heart away?
I know I've put you though crap
I'm forever sorry for hurting you

So please tell me
Shall I be forgiven for it all
Or is there already someone else?
My tears fall for you
lost and afraid, have I lost?

So please tell me,
Do you want me to be yours?
Is there someone else?
Have I lost you forever?
So please tell me
the answers to my questions.

Copyright © vampiricsuccubus ... [ 2004-05-21 20:38:31]
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Re: So Please Tell Me (User Rating: 1 )
by bigtig6269 on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 05:10:18 PM AEST
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I figured you could use at least one comment on this one.
Very nice write, sounds like one of my ex girlfriends. Sometimes, that's just the way this are. Good job, keep it up

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