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By: Danielle

A beauty so rare
So unruly and fare
To say I told you so…
Before you were known as the schools hoe
You were trapped
Couldn’t fight his strength
He had you at hello
But he wasn’t as he played off to be,
Cool or mellow
He ripped your shirt
You thought he was just kidding
You thought it was just fun and games…
Then realized he didn’t even know your name
You screamed for help
How could anyone hear
He had you captive
You could hardly bare
To breathe…
His strong hand over your small mouth
wasn’t all that great of help
Your mascara running, your red lipstick smeared
He bent over whispered in your ear
You try and act cute, look at where that brought you
You’re a conceited *****, nobody really wants you
Besides your hair is always the same, perfect and tame
How could anyone want someone so lame
You were an easy lay,
that’s all I’ll say
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Unbearable Strength

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 08:05:28 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

"unbearable Strength"
By: Danielle

A beauty so rare
So unruly and fare
To say I told you so…
Before you were known as the schools hoe
You were trapped
Couldn’t fight his strength
He had you at hello
But he wasn’t as he played off to be,
Cool or mellow
He ripped your shirt
You thought he was just kidding
You thought it was just fun and games…
Then realized he didn’t even know your name
You screamed for help
How could anyone hear
He had you captive
You could hardly bare
To breathe…
His strong hand over your small mouth
wasn’t all that great of help
Your mascara running, your red lipstick smeared
He bent over whispered in your ear
You try and act cute, look at where that brought you
You’re a conceited *****, nobody really wants you
Besides your hair is always the same, perfect and tame
How could anyone want someone so lame
You were an easy lay,
that’s all I’ll say

Copyright Â© Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-05-21 20:05:28]
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Re: Unbearable Strength (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 08:55:52 PM AEST
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Wow, that's really sad, harsh, and well written all in one. Maybe it wasn't the girls fault though. It's so easy to mistake hate for love sometimes. I don't think it makes her necessarily a bad person, ya know? Excellent piece. Please keep writing.
Katie

Re: Unbearable Strength (User Rating: 1 )
by EvaRee on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 01:53:07 PM AEST
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I am crying...I hate this because this is something i should have wrote, because honey, you are not alone.....it was so beautiful though....the way you expressed yourself.....But you need to remember that in the end, you are the stronger one because you are still here fighting, and you will win. As long as you dont give up. Believe me, I have been there again and agian, saddly, and i have given up, but in the end we are all stronger for just staying alive and making it through something that bad. Justr learn from it. Dont let it bring you down. Make it make you a better person and in the end...you win. You will win. you'll win.....
Eva

Re: Unbearable Strength (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:45:10 AM AEST
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sad....when I read this is angers me that someone could ever do that to anyone. Its a weak act by a weak person. powerful words . great write yet again, captivating. A++++

Re: Unbearable Strength (User Rating: 1 )
by Hades on Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 04:22:11 AM AEST
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Very sad piece. Nicely written.

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