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Remembrance

Contributed by alwys2nv on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:34:24 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Are you sad to see my blood
are you scared of what i've done
look at my blood and tell me what you see
can you see all my misery
you cant imagined the ***** i've been through
even if you knew what was going on
its way to late there's nothing no one can do
why could'nt any one help me before all this happened
it does'nt matter now
but i have one thing to say br /> as the knife goes across my skin
it starts to glisten with blood running thin
as it glides across my skin,
my skin comming apart
i feel no pain as its released
i begin to believe i have no heart
my blood on this page will always remind me,
that i will never feel pain
this poem will always remind me that i will never be sane
this will be my remembrance of the day i used the knife
this will always be my remembrance to the world i showed my life




Copyright © alwys2nv ... [ 2004-05-21 09:34:24]
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Re: Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:22:18 AM AEST
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SO SAD- BUT GOOD WRITING


Re: Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 11:13:08 AM AEST
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this is pwerful stuff! its excellent....!!!!!!!


Re: Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 01:12:51 PM AEST
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Very powerful, I can relate to this well.As I am a cutter too (((HUGS))) Well not done it for a few months now and I know that if I can get there so can others like yourself.

Great stuff, very sad tho.

Pixie xx


Re: Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 02:19:25 PM AEST
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I can not relate to cutting...but I can see your pain is real...You have talent keep writing it is a great outlet

Shari




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