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what would you do
you fell in love
and he said I Love You
then your family spoke out
called him scum of the earth
dragged him through the mud
and treated him like dirt
I need your help
need your advice
please help me now
my head's in a vice
I need your help
and i'm depressed
I want to cry
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ATTENTION EVERYONE;I NEED YOUR HELP

Contributed by kailadragon on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:21:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

If you had this problem
what would you do
you fell in love
and he said I Love You
then your family spoke out
called him scum of the earth
dragged him through the mud
and treated him like dirt
I need your help
need your advice
please help me now
my head's in a vice
I need your help
and i'm depressed
I want to cry
but I don't know whats best

Copyright © kailadragon ... [ 2004-05-20 13:21:49]
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Re: ATTENTION EVERYONE;I NEED YOUR HELP (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:27:49 PM AEST
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Don't worry so much about making mistakes- we all do.
we all will.
Learn as much as you can,
Talk as much as you need.
If all is still not clear
Listen to your heart.
nice write.

Re: ATTENTION EVERYONE;I NEED YOUR HELP (User Rating: 1 )
by Another_Dimension on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:29:07 PM AEST
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Its like romeo and juliet :) but dont kill yourselfs, depending on how old you, i'd say move out but if you're young. If he's not what they think he is, you have to prove to them that he's not. Talk to them, tell them to give him a chance. tell thme how much he means to you :) x

Re: ATTENTION EVERYONE;I NEED YOUR HELP (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 03:00:07 PM AEST
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Good advice given on both comments... Heed them.
I myself was in a similar position many, many years ago..but we showed them that we were so much in love and right for each other...and here we are.. still together today. We recently celebrated our 25th wedding anniversary... so don't give up...
Jenni

Re: ATTENTION EVERYONE;I NEED YOUR HELP (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:21:18 PM AEST
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Well, in my opinion, love is love. Love is the same at any age. Maybe your family notices something funny about him so be cautious but if you think it's love, don't let it go! Best of luck!
Katie

Re: ATTENTION EVERYONE;I NEED YOUR HELP (User Rating: 1 )
by Solmyr1404 on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 03:46:29 PM AEST
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you categorized this one wrong, kaila, you haven't lost him, there's just an obstacle in the path to him....if you know you love him and he loves you, then it's not lost love....as for what was said by your family, that was their opinion and i think if you think different, you actually know him when they don't, so you have your opinion and you have fact....
Solmyr Malikando Amerikayou
:)

Re: ATTENTION EVERYONE;I NEED YOUR HELP (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:37:08 PM AEST
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follow ur heart. it will always lead u right
~allyson~

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