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Array ( [sid] => 48376 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Takes Time [time] => 2004-05-20 09:37:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Youll never know the way I feel
Towards your love, is this for real
The scars inside will never heal
Yet I need you, so whats the deal
You say you care, yet is it true
I need to hear you say you do
Please try hold on and ride it through
It hurt so bad, I hope you knew
You broke my heart, left me alone
You turned my heart to one of stone
But now my love has slowly grown
Its time for you to now be shown
You come into my life then leave
Each time you go I cannot breathe
I need you more than youd believe
I see you go then sit and grieve
I need you close, I need you here
I need your love, I need to near
Ive broken down my wall of fear
I said I love you, Did you hear? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Takes Time

Contributed by jt on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:37:12 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Youll never know the way I feel
Towards your love, is this for real
The scars inside will never heal
Yet I need you, so whats the deal
You say you care, yet is it true
I need to hear you say you do
Please try hold on and ride it through
It hurt so bad, I hope you knew
You broke my heart, left me alone
You turned my heart to one of stone
But now my love has slowly grown
Its time for you to now be shown
You come into my life then leave
Each time you go I cannot breathe
I need you more than youd believe
I see you go then sit and grieve
I need you close, I need you here
I need your love, I need to near
Ive broken down my wall of fear
I said I love you, Did you hear?

Copyright © jt ... [ 2004-05-20 09:37:12]
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Re: Takes Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:55:00 AM AEST
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This was an awesome flow of your words...they went together so well..I loved it...I know that it's hard sometimes...to go through what you are going through...yet you will always break free...just look around and notice people all everywhere going through things similar to what you are going through...anyways great write keep em coming...read some of my work...comments are welcomed...!!!

Re: Takes Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:20:26 PM AEST
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this reads like somethign i wrote a long time ago to my parents, yet i know your thoguths probably lie elsewhere. superb writing. ;0)
~Remy~

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