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Array ( [sid] => 48374 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This is what I needed??? [time] => 2004-05-20 09:35:38 [hometext] => I had to say goodbye...and it was the hardest thing for me to do...I thought I loved him I thought he loved me too??? [bodytext] => "This is what I needed???"
By: Danielle

I stand in front of my window
Biting my nails
I have been waiting?
Is this how it feels if someone fails
I see your car pull up
Invite you in
Suddenly I feel maybe you win
We stand there in awkward movements
As soon as I’m about to cry
You throw your arms around me and know exactly why
I’m not sad, but happy for once
This is what I wanted
This is what I needed
I pull away
you look at me hesitantly
I think your debating
No, not now
I remember our past and look at you and smile
I say hey it’s been a while
And we kissed
I realize what I cried for is what I missed
So long ago
This was allowed
But now your gone
Leaving Monday
This was him begging of our goodbye
Because what I promised
I’m going to have to break it
This is the last time I’ll be with you
This is the last time I’ll ever feel you
This is the last time me and you
Will talk like this
We talked for hours at a time
About the stupidest things
You kissed my forehead
And I felt I was worth something
This is what I needed
To be brought up
And let down not gently
But for sure
Ill never see you again
But I will always and forever miss you
This is what I needed???
To lose the one I love?
To be heart broken?
But does everyone go through this?
Does everyone feel the way I feel now
At least once in their lives?
I doubt it…
Not exactly but similar
This isn’t what I needed
At least not now
I loved him
And now I have to let him go

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This is what I needed???

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:35:38 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



"This is what I needed???"
By: Danielle

I stand in front of my window
Biting my nails
I have been waiting?
Is this how it feels if someone fails
I see your car pull up
Invite you in
Suddenly I feel maybe you win
We stand there in awkward movements
As soon as I’m about to cry
You throw your arms around me and know exactly why
I’m not sad, but happy for once
This is what I wanted
This is what I needed
I pull away
you look at me hesitantly
I think your debating
No, not now
I remember our past and look at you and smile
I say hey it’s been a while
And we kissed
I realize what I cried for is what I missed
So long ago
This was allowed
But now your gone
Leaving Monday
This was him begging of our goodbye
Because what I promised
I’m going to have to break it
This is the last time I’ll be with you
This is the last time I’ll ever feel you
This is the last time me and you
Will talk like this
We talked for hours at a time
About the stupidest things
You kissed my forehead
And I felt I was worth something
This is what I needed
To be brought up
And let down not gently
But for sure
Ill never see you again
But I will always and forever miss you
This is what I needed???
To lose the one I love?
To be heart broken?
But does everyone go through this?
Does everyone feel the way I feel now
At least once in their lives?
I doubt it…
Not exactly but similar
This isn’t what I needed
At least not now
I loved him
And now I have to let him go





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Re: This is what I needed??? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 11:38:11 AM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, your not alone, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: This is what I needed??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:25:10 PM AEST
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i hate remembering things like this, cuz i think upon them the same way when they happen and thereafter. still, a beautiful landscape you painted with your words... ;0)
~Remy~


Re: This is what I needed??? (User Rating: 1 )
by EvaRee on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 01:56:09 PM AEST
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Another wonderful job...


Re: This is what I needed??? (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:09:54 AM AEST
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Deeply emotional....wow.


Re: This is what I needed??? (User Rating: 1 )
by abie05 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 02:36:06 AM AEST
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read some of ur work ... =) i think der all pretty gud ... hey as long as it came from ur heart rite ? =P nways .... dis one broke my heart coz i can relate to how it feels to say gudbye to sumone ... keep it up =)


Re: This is what I needed??? (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:57:39 AM AEST
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you did a very good job of painting the picture as you go.. the reader feels like they're there with you and understands how you feel and it brings pain to them to know all you went through.. nice job and i hope you've found someone to replace your lost love.. AMI JO




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