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shattered glass lasts no matta wat the weather
unanswered phone calls are seen as no good
but say more than recieved ones ever really could
black and white tiles symbolize grace
but a scar on a cheek ruins a face
questions and answers - chalk and cheese
hungry dogs soon forget how to please
just like an alien wen i try 2 sleep at nite
trains speed away - i decide 2 take flight
and as i sit here on my spaceship bed
the silver steel ends my dreams in red
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friends come and go but enemies r 4eva

Contributed by bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:19:56 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

friends come and go but enemies are 4eva
shattered glass lasts no matta wat the weather
unanswered phone calls are seen as no good
but say more than recieved ones ever really could
black and white tiles symbolize grace
but a scar on a cheek ruins a face
questions and answers - chalk and cheese
hungry dogs soon forget how to please
just like an alien wen i try 2 sleep at nite
trains speed away - i decide 2 take flight
and as i sit here on my spaceship bed
the silver steel ends my dreams in red

Copyright © bohemian_with_a_pen ... [ 2004-05-20 02:19:56]
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Re: friends come and go but enemies r 4eva (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 03:43:32 AM AEST
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wow this is rwally hard hitting you use some good metphors here i liked this alot!! well done cant wait to read more of your writting!

Re: friends come and go but enemies r 4eva (User Rating: 1 )
by AmaNdAsHepArD on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:05:04 AM AEST
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this is such a great poem ....... very detailed and not too long great job.............keep it up
**vamp**

Re: friends come and go but enemies r 4eva (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 04:06:41 AM AEST
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wow this one hit me hard as recently i feel out with the person i thought was my best friend and we would never fall out. but we have. i can completely relate to this poem as i went through i a smiliar thought pattern and carried it out. but i am happy to say now im doing well and im incredibly happy! thanks for sharing such an excellent write!!!!!

love and hugs
XgenX

Re: friends come and go but enemies r 4eva (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:01:29 AM AEST
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well written,I like the flow.

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