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Just to see if you had room within your heart
I wanted to see if I could reach you, to make you mine
To see if there was a glimmer to be found with your eyes

What I found was so much more than childish infatuation
There was a life time of untapped emotion, looking for release
Within you, there was so much more than I could ever dream
I found neatly penned entrance ways, the kind in my prayers

There was nothing to be seen of physical gain
I knew you'd be content with me just knowing your identiy
You tried not to show it all, but it eventually slipped out
Within a song you had wrote a message was waiting to be found

You embraced not the devil I had suddenly become
Appearing numb to the rumors that were spreading fast
Within a tender kiss, I awoke eyes opened to a new sight
That the gate to your heart opened, and you welcomed me
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Gate To Your Heart

Contributed by TheReturnOfx7 on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:41:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I gave you a rose just to see if you'd smile
Just to see if you had room within your heart
I wanted to see if I could reach you, to make you mine
To see if there was a glimmer to be found with your eyes

What I found was so much more than childish infatuation
There was a life time of untapped emotion, looking for release
Within you, there was so much more than I could ever dream
I found neatly penned entrance ways, the kind in my prayers

There was nothing to be seen of physical gain
I knew you'd be content with me just knowing your identiy
You tried not to show it all, but it eventually slipped out
Within a song you had wrote a message was waiting to be found

You embraced not the devil I had suddenly become
Appearing numb to the rumors that were spreading fast
Within a tender kiss, I awoke eyes opened to a new sight
That the gate to your heart opened, and you welcomed me

Copyright © TheReturnOfx7 ... [ 2004-05-20 00:41:21]
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Re: Gate To Your Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:23:47 AM AEST
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(((((((((hugs)))))))
Jase...this is so beautiful...I have missed your wonderful work..... and you... (And I still maintain you're cute)
Thank you so much for that most touching comment... you'll never know how much it meant to me.....
Glad to see you back...
Hugs and Luv,
Jenni

Re: Gate To Your Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 11:49:37 AM AEST
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this is beautiful...

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