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Array ( [sid] => 48330 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dirty Girl [time] => 2004-05-19 23:33:34 [hometext] => I give in to things, that afterwards I wish I hadn't done at all! [bodytext] => Dirty girl-
you don't belong!
Stupid girl-
can't you listen?
You go to any guy,
you just can't say no.
For some reason
you feel so ugly,
you don't feel any
self worth.
When a guy shows up
you crumble!
You dig a huge hole,
you can't crawl out of!
What's wrong with you?
Don't you care?
Stupid, Stupid
poor girl.
Wound up feeling used.
Just give in,
that's all you do.
Stop being so nice!
Stand up,
be a woman,
tell them who you are,
and that your not just some
dirty trash! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 61 [informant] => nessa_lee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Dirty Girl

Contributed by nessa_lee on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:33:34 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Dirty girl-
you don't belong!
Stupid girl-
can't you listen?
You go to any guy,
you just can't say no.
For some reason
you feel so ugly,
you don't feel any
self worth.
When a guy shows up
you crumble!
You dig a huge hole,
you can't crawl out of!
What's wrong with you?
Don't you care?
Stupid, Stupid
poor girl.
Wound up feeling used.
Just give in,
that's all you do.
Stop being so nice!
Stand up,
be a woman,
tell them who you are,
and that your not just some
dirty trash!

Copyright © nessa_lee ... [ 2004-05-19 23:33:34]
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Re: Dirty Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:02:30 AM AEST
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It sounds like you are really going through a lot in your life, but you seem to be going forward now which is really good. Nice read, and thanks for sharing. Just try to remember, you don't need to use sex, to land a nice guy.

Re: Dirty Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Chuck_Baclagon on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:32:00 AM AEST
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I must say that I'll all out for women's empowerment and feminism, and I guess that's why this poem has gotten my attention, I hope that more girls would start speaking out their minds just as you did in this poem, thanks.

Re: Dirty Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:21:32 AM AEST
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this poem reminds me of a girl i know
touches a senseitive spot
nice write

Re: Dirty Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:21:43 AM AEST
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its hard to admit things like this to yourself but full respect for sharing. nice write

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