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[aid] => mick
[title] => alas
[time] => 2004-05-19 23:07:51
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[bodytext] => zapping my creative flow; but does he know
my mind is in a catatonic state; how to relate
these ebb and tides of rhyme; they are mine
thoughts must be conveyed by my soul; to be whole
muses have a mind of their own; offer them a home
my heart heals then is set back; my flow i lack
peaceful days and carefree nights; i hold tight
my dog by my side who cares; breeze in my hair
i have lost my physical voice; not poetical choice
writing it out, feeling my poetry; loving the trees
it may all disapear; if my being cannot hear
i ask not for much; only candles and such
a day of rain for inspiration; no hesitation
his promises broken; hurtful words spoken
alas; he is an ass.
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alas
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:07:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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zapping my creative flow; but does he know
my mind is in a catatonic state; how to relate
these ebb and tides of rhyme; they are mine
thoughts must be conveyed by my soul; to be whole
muses have a mind of their own; offer them a home
my heart heals then is set back; my flow i lack
peaceful days and carefree nights; i hold tight
my dog by my side who cares; breeze in my hair
i have lost my physical voice; not poetical choice
writing it out, feeling my poetry; loving the trees
it may all disapear; if my being cannot hear
i ask not for much; only candles and such
a day of rain for inspiration; no hesitation
his promises broken; hurtful words spoken
alas; he is an ass.
§* *§
*|*
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Re: alas
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by SeanMcHaney on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:25:32 PM AEST
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| the poem is very well written, i particularly like the last line |
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Re: alas
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:30:56 PM AEST
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Hope your Physical voice comes back soon, Ness.... I know your poetic voice will never leave you.. good write..
hugs
Jenni |
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Re: alas
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by venkat on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:21:01 AM AEST
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| so disheartening..my heart becomes heavy by reading this..stay strong my dear. venkat |
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Re: alas
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:30:29 AM AEST
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And I have been told you are an excellent judge of character too!! LOL
Hope you are better soon, Nessa.
Love n hugs,
Rita |
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Re: alas
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:53:44 AM AEST
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If rain be the inspiration, may everyday rain so that you return and retain, all the beautiful words you write.
Thank you for sharing.
Chris |
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Re: alas
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by shelby on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:54:27 PM AEST
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so deep and flowing then the very end alas he is an ass I love it!!!!!!!!!
Michelle |
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Re: alas
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:09:36 PM AEST
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| Nessa, stay strong my dear friend. This might be a sad write, but it's written out of truth. Very beautiful. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: alas
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by TheVoice on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:53:08 PM AEST
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hurtful words may sting and cause pain
but there will always come a healing rain
though today he may be an ass
this too in time will pass.
wishing to make you happy.
tight hugs and bright smiles,
bruce
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Re: alas
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:36:40 PM AEST
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I can relate. Nice write LOL
Whisper |
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Re: alas
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:58:11 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa...Your words can never be silenced by an ass. You pound out poetry just as the rain pounds out drop upon drop!You live to love and you love to live. Allow your poetry to heal you as you surround yourself with candles, and your dog. :-) As you know, animals are a great healing tool! As is rain inspiration. May you find all your soul seeks.
My warmest blessings to you my friend!
Angel always...Joni |
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Re: alas
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by Merry on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 11:16:00 AM AEST
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alas, you are right. a lovely wistful poem - you will always find inspiration within, for you are a true poet.
hugs n love sis
Merry |
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Re: alas
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:37:58 AM AEST
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Wow, girlfriend,
U got it going on.
Keep up the good work.
U shall be free, my friend, u shall be free.
Luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: alas
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:03:47 AM AEST
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| Alas, he is definitely an ass for losing you ... but you'll never lose your creative flow Nessa, hugs Jan |
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Re: alas
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by Soulless on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:38:04 PM AEST
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Yes!!! "Rainfairy" Rain always inspires me as well as night when I have the candles lit. So I can definetely relate to the feel and atmosphere of this poem. Woderful once again.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: alas
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by Archie on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:14:28 PM AEST
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| It seems like you have writer's block. I hope inspiring words come back to you. |
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