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Array ( [sid] => 48302 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Torn apart [time] => 2004-05-19 20:57:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In hallow halls
Where teardrops fall

And all your lies resound

I cannot hide
Deep inside

The sounds are to profound

I think again
Of all your sin

And see you do your deeds

I feel you so
Deep in my soul

And you ignore my needs

I call to you
And yet you do

Nothing that I ask

You simple stay
Hidden away

Behind your favorite masks

I only want
You not to taunt

And tease me like you will

Because I know
Because you show

It’s how you get your thrills

I only long
Where I belong

Tucked inside your arms

Where I shall stay
As days pass way

Safe from outside harm

And yet it seems
Awake or in dream

You lie just out of grasp

But I will try
Until I die

To feel you souls warm clasp

But if I don’t
Or if you won’t

Open up your heart

Alone ill stay
For all my days

Forever torn apart.... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 283 [topic] => 22 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Torn apart

Contributed by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 08:57:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

In hallow halls
Where teardrops fall

And all your lies resound

I cannot hide
Deep inside

The sounds are to profound

I think again
Of all your sin

And see you do your deeds

I feel you so
Deep in my soul

And you ignore my needs

I call to you
And yet you do

Nothing that I ask

You simple stay
Hidden away

Behind your favorite masks

I only want
You not to taunt

And tease me like you will

Because I know
Because you show

It’s how you get your thrills

I only long
Where I belong

Tucked inside your arms

Where I shall stay
As days pass way

Safe from outside harm

And yet it seems
Awake or in dream

You lie just out of grasp

But I will try
Until I die

To feel you souls warm clasp

But if I don’t
Or if you won’t

Open up your heart

Alone ill stay
For all my days

Forever torn apart....

Copyright Â© holderofthestone ... [ 2004-05-19 20:57:44]
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Re: Torn apart (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:25:41 PM AEST
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Nice! "forever" though is a very long time... trust in yourself and in time. You'll find the right someone and when you do - you won't need to ask for anything, it will be given to you without an ounce of hesitation.
*** Thanks for your note on "There in..." - much appreciated!

Re: Torn apart (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:39:07 PM AEST
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"forever torn apart"

how real that is right now for me...
i cant even remember being happy its like a hazy memory that seems like a surreal dream

wayne

Re: Torn apart (User Rating: 1 )
by wray on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 07:11:14 AM AEST
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I like the way you wrote this, almost like the broken up lines represent the fragments of your heart... If all these poems are based on real experiences it sounds like you've had it rough. But I feel you.

Re: Torn apart (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:52:06 AM AEST
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wow, wow, wow, you dont know how much this one relates to me...I mean it was like I wrote it...I dont kow..I find it really unique yet weird that we are going through almost the exact situation...I think it's a great write...I will try and get to all of them and post comments...I love your writing so much Ima do that...lol masterpieces i tell you masterpieces...your gonna be famous one day...lol you are...your like the only one on this site...I write fricken paragraph long reviews lol...you deserve them...lol very powerful write...lots of emotion and feeling...
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo

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