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Array ( [sid] => 48255 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Utopia on the Horizon [time] => 2004-05-19 15:21:19 [hometext] => Wrote this also for Creative Writing class earlier this year (10-2-03). Enjoy! Comments appreciated. Thank you!! [bodytext] => There's a utopia on the horizon,
That believers can only see,
A place that is calming and peaceful,
Exactly what this world needs.
Where the sun is always shining,
And all you need is Heaven's light,
A place where no sorrow is allowed,
The epitome of the afterlife.
There's a utopia on the horizon,
And I can feel it's warm rays on me,
A place where you are guided by the Lord's hand,
And happiness is all you see.
This utopia,
Is where the horizon and Heavens meet,
A place where you are spiritually cleansed,
And are guided by your feet.
It's just beyond the clouds,
Where the Lord welcomes you as "my son",
A place where you can rest and find peace,
A utopia on the horizon.

*Heather Marie Hutchins* [comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 62 [informant] => heddermarie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )

Utopia on the Horizon

Contributed by heddermarie on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:21:19 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

There's a utopia on the horizon,
That believers can only see,
A place that is calming and peaceful,
Exactly what this world needs.
Where the sun is always shining,
And all you need is Heaven's light,
A place where no sorrow is allowed,
The epitome of the afterlife.
There's a utopia on the horizon,
And I can feel it's warm rays on me,
A place where you are guided by the Lord's hand,
And happiness is all you see.
This utopia,
Is where the horizon and Heavens meet,
A place where you are spiritually cleansed,
And are guided by your feet.
It's just beyond the clouds,
Where the Lord welcomes you as "my son",
A place where you can rest and find peace,
A utopia on the horizon.

*Heather Marie Hutchins*

Copyright © heddermarie ... [ 2004-05-19 15:21:19]
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Re: Utopia on the Horizon (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:22:53 PM AEST
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nicely written some beautiful images are placed in this poem - well done :)

feel free to comment on my poems btw...

Re: Utopia on the Horizon (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:28:11 PM AEST
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the world cant have a utopia for everyone because everyones perfect place or vision of perfect is different. a utopia is meant for one person i suppose.

Re: Utopia on the Horizon (User Rating: 1 )
by Cole on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 08:15:55 PM AEST
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I think this should be seperated into stanzas. Have a break after line 4, 8, 12, and 16. Other than that though, this is very well written. I really enjoyed reading it.

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