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That bastard told me to kill myself today
Dancing, dancing, care-free, baby,
And yet here I am, holding you up and watching you puke
Some kick ass party
I'll wake up in an unknown bed
Singing songs like no one can hear you
You know deep down you really do care
My eyes are green, green with envy
And now you drown me in irony
These walls are paper thin, I'll smash straight through
I'll blackmail you, but only because I love no one but you
Just because you didn't care yesterday
It makes love the brand new, ****** up game
No one is listening, no one
I feel like shouting it out to the world
Dancing in the rain like some b-grade actress
To 80's techno love records
Only because they make sense
Some kick ass party I refused to go to
There's a party in my head
I don't ******* care what they say
After the party I'll wake up in someone else’s bed
And when you find out, I'll know
Secretly I'll admit it
That every time the record plays
I think of you and forget to breathe [comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 48 [informant] => carmen_queasy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My Record

Contributed by carmen_queasy on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:51:47 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Night on the town, we'll paint the skies
That bastard told me to kill myself today
Dancing, dancing, care-free, baby,
And yet here I am, holding you up and watching you puke
Some kick ass party
I'll wake up in an unknown bed
Singing songs like no one can hear you
You know deep down you really do care
My eyes are green, green with envy
And now you drown me in irony
These walls are paper thin, I'll smash straight through
I'll blackmail you, but only because I love no one but you
Just because you didn't care yesterday
It makes love the brand new, ****** up game
No one is listening, no one
I feel like shouting it out to the world
Dancing in the rain like some b-grade actress
To 80's techno love records
Only because they make sense
Some kick ass party I refused to go to
There's a party in my head
I don't ******* care what they say
After the party I'll wake up in someone else’s bed
And when you find out, I'll know
Secretly I'll admit it
That every time the record plays
I think of you and forget to breathe

Copyright Â© carmen_queasy ... [ 2004-05-19 14:51:47]
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Re: My Record (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:42:59 PM AEST
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you have a unique style of writing I liked this one a lot actually beautiful analogies secretly hidden keep it up..
much love,
Dani

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