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Array ( [sid] => 48230 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BLOODIED WORLD. [time] => 2004-05-19 11:19:08 [hometext] => I'm not sure how to tackel this problem with tara unless i just cut out the pain... this is was happened last night. i think i fell asleep but i might have just fainted from loss of blood. [bodytext] => Make rough scratches,
All up my wrist.
Fall, on the floor.
Sleeping in the mist.
Wake up!
In a night mare zone!
Where the monsters come and get me.
‘Coz I’m all on my own!!

I was sleeping,
In those silent dreams,
When I was inside,
I just screamed and screamed!

Then things went.
And I was happy again,
But dreamt some memories,
They were flash-backs in my brain…

And I don’t remember any thing,
From after that.
I just woke up crying,
Lying, on my back.
Got up, undressed,
Went to sleep in my bed.
I was thinking of LAURA.
Her voice stuck in my head.

That was last night…

Went to school today,
The dried blood still on my wrist.
There is noise in this classroom.
I’m too weak to use my fist…
Hannah was back in school,
And Tara’s cutting too.
I don’t know what to do!
But use,
My slitting tool...

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BLOODIED WORLD.

Contributed by deathdrop on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:19:08 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Make rough scratches,
All up my wrist.
Fall, on the floor.
Sleeping in the mist.
Wake up!
In a night mare zone!
Where the monsters come and get me.
‘Coz I’m all on my own!!

I was sleeping,
In those silent dreams,
When I was inside,
I just screamed and screamed!

Then things went.
And I was happy again,
But dreamt some memories,
They were flash-backs in my brain…

And I don’t remember any thing,
From after that.
I just woke up crying,
Lying, on my back.
Got up, undressed,
Went to sleep in my bed.
I was thinking of LAURA.
Her voice stuck in my head.

That was last night…

Went to school today,
The dried blood still on my wrist.
There is noise in this classroom.
I’m too weak to use my fist…
Hannah was back in school,
And Tara’s cutting too.
I don’t know what to do!
But use,
My slitting tool...

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Re: BLOODIED WORLD. (User Rating: 1 )
by taintedmind on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:36:58 AM AEST
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this is so great maybe you should talk to tara
remember slicing yourself doesn't always solve our problems i know i have cut myself to pieces and near about died read some of my stuff writing takes away the pain IM me if you want to talk

Re: BLOODIED WORLD. (User Rating: 1 )
by StrangeLittleGirl on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 12:09:03 PM AEST
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I just posted a poem about self harm. I used to do it alot, but now I just write. Writing does help, it lets your emotions out, like when you cut. Good poem. :)

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