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Whats going on within my mind, something decent or something unkind

It's cutting me up and tearing me apart
This hatred within a lovers heart

You shouldn't have done this and made a mess
When you can't even pick up the peaces or even confess
You think your funny and your so smart
But really thats nothing without a heart

So get a grip and see whats real
There's no part of you anyone wants to steal
So my advice to you would be
Something serious you may not see
Within your heart, your soul, your mind
Your simply going to have to find,
How to be nicer and how to be kind,
Trust me It will help ease your mind
And owe what peace for us mankind [comments] => 6 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 21 [informant] => SweetRhythm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Never Seem To Get It Right

Contributed by SweetRhythm on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:25:52 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Always stuck between you and a fight
Whats going on within my mind, something decent or something unkind

It's cutting me up and tearing me apart
This hatred within a lovers heart

You shouldn't have done this and made a mess
When you can't even pick up the peaces or even confess
You think your funny and your so smart
But really thats nothing without a heart

So get a grip and see whats real
There's no part of you anyone wants to steal
So my advice to you would be
Something serious you may not see
Within your heart, your soul, your mind
Your simply going to have to find,
How to be nicer and how to be kind,
Trust me It will help ease your mind
And owe what peace for us mankind

Copyright © SweetRhythm ... [ 2004-05-19 10:25:52]
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Re: Never Seem To Get It Right (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:42:51 AM AEST
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Good clear wording addressed to some-one that needs to be a little sweeter in temperament.

bernard.

Re: Never Seem To Get It Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:59:50 AM AEST
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well written
Shari

Re: Never Seem To Get It Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:27:22 AM AEST
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"Better To Understand a Little Than Misunderstand a Lot." Corrina, these are very true words. I like this, it is straight and to the point.

Rita

Re: Never Seem To Get It Right (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:49:21 AM AEST
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wonderful poem, love these lines,"You think your funny and your so smart/But really thats nothing without a heart" hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Never Seem To Get It Right (User Rating: 1 )
by brown on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:37:21 PM AEST
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good write. dido comes to mind

Re: Never Seem To Get It Right (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:49:38 PM AEST
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another good poem! this has sincere feeling to it. I understand where your coming from. A++++

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