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Array ( [sid] => 48221 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daniel Huggins [time] => 2004-05-19 10:12:12 [hometext] => i was bored. [bodytext] =>
Days pass by as I think of you.
All I could ever want lies in you.
Now I need to do something to make us come to be.
I love you babe, I’m glad you can see it.
Every day you tell me you love me.
Love is our special procession.

How every time we do not talk I miss you.
Ugly you are not.
Gorgeous you definitely are.
Gooey is the feeling you make me feel inside.
Is this feeling the same for you?
Never say something you are not truthful to.
Sexy you say I am, all I can say is thank you.

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Daniel Huggins

Contributed by little_genna on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:12:12 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Days pass by as I think of you.
All I could ever want lies in you.
Now I need to do something to make us come to be.
I love you babe, I’m glad you can see it.
Every day you tell me you love me.
Love is our special procession.

How every time we do not talk I miss you.
Ugly you are not.
Gorgeous you definitely are.
Gooey is the feeling you make me feel inside.
Is this feeling the same for you?
Never say something you are not truthful to.
Sexy you say I am, all I can say is thank you.

Copyright Â© little_genna ... [ 2004-05-19 10:12:12]
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Re: Daniel Huggins (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:15:31 AM AEST
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this line 'Never say something you not are not truthful to'. should read

'Never say something you are not truthful to' sorry for the mess up of that line guys.

love and hugs
XgenX

Re: Daniel Huggins (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:17:32 AM AEST
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this is cute! :)

good writing

Re: Daniel Huggins (User Rating: 1 )
by Cole on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 08:12:57 PM AEST
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Based on just the first stanza, I thought this was going to be a pretty good poem for something you wrote when you were bored. But, then I read the second stanza, and I realized how forced things can be.

-Kholie-

P.S. - I had no intention as coming across as rude. I reread the post, and it might have sounded that way. It should be taken light-heartedly.

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