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By: Danielle

I would throw my arms around you
The hairs on our sweaters fused together
When I’m around you everything goes fast
I wish I could make these moments last
Our hands…
Intertwined together, clasped, gasping for air
No words are spoken
Not now at least
I’m taking you in
Making you a feast
I tell you I love you
You respond with excitement
Lift me up and say it back
Twirling me, holding me tight
This is The Perfect Night
You set me down
Hugging me
you pull me away
Look into my eyes
And lean in
Our thoughts meet
Sparks fly
I for once in my life would hate if I die
You hold me tight
I feel light
This is…The Perfect Night

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This is the perfect night

Contributed by Living_in_my_dream on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:18:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

"This is the perfect night"
By: Danielle

I would throw my arms around you
The hairs on our sweaters fused together
When I’m around you everything goes fast
I wish I could make these moments last
Our hands…
Intertwined together, clasped, gasping for air
No words are spoken
Not now at least
I’m taking you in
Making you a feast
I tell you I love you
You respond with excitement
Lift me up and say it back
Twirling me, holding me tight
This is The Perfect Night
You set me down
Hugging me
you pull me away
Look into my eyes
And lean in
Our thoughts meet
Sparks fly
I for once in my life would hate if I die
You hold me tight
I feel light
This is…The Perfect Night

Copyright Â© Living_in_my_dream ... [ 2004-05-19 02:18:41]
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Re: This is the perfect night (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:23:36 AM AEST
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great write. Really captured the moment.
-jt-

Re: This is the perfect night (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 03:14:41 AM AEST
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I for once in my life would hate if I die... very deep here dani. I really like this poem but this line stands out to me. great write

Re: This is the perfect night (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:04:51 AM AEST
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Well written innervision of a perfect moment that we encounter from time to time as we are tripping through the rift....I feel you on this one.

Re: This is the perfect night (User Rating: 1 )
by youlied on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:12:51 PM AEST
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I really felt this one, great write.

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