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Array ( [sid] => 48166 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Weakness [time] => 2004-05-18 22:15:39 [hometext] => Are Feelings Weakness, or Are Thoughts? [bodytext] => Weakness

I don't know everything
I'm sure that it's killing me
The wondering
The uncertainity
My weakness
They all have combined
To give me my worst greif
With every situation
I'm bound to them

With every time
I never leave their grasps
I'm controlled and killed

If I was stronger than this
I would be free of them
If I was stronger than this
I would never feel this
But I'm not stronger
I grow weaker and weaker
To where I've succumbed
To being nothing

And it's my fault
For being weak and giving in
To feeling with my heart
And not thinking with my mind [comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Weakness

Contributed by essentially9 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:15:39 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Weakness

I don't know everything
I'm sure that it's killing me
The wondering
The uncertainity
My weakness
They all have combined
To give me my worst greif
With every situation
I'm bound to them

With every time
I never leave their grasps
I'm controlled and killed

If I was stronger than this
I would be free of them
If I was stronger than this
I would never feel this
But I'm not stronger
I grow weaker and weaker
To where I've succumbed
To being nothing

And it's my fault
For being weak and giving in
To feeling with my heart
And not thinking with my mind

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2004-05-18 22:15:39]
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Re: Weakness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:46:40 PM AEST
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Feelings and thoughts can be either weaknesses or strengths. It depends if you are wise enough to use both heart and mind and do what is best for you despite what you might really want. Want and need are two separate things which sometimes we fail to realize. Good luck.

Rita

Re: Weakness (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 02:26:27 PM AEST
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I doubt there is any real weakness inside of you.You have more to speak of and scream of then most people I know twice your age..This write is another great post..It speaks volumes

Re: Weakness (User Rating: 1 )
by sydney2strite on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 06:37:53 PM AEST
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I love this poem!

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