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[title] => Eternal Sleep
[time] => 2004-05-18 17:14:16
[hometext] => I wrote this for my friend who is a cutter
[bodytext] => You took your knife, your cut ran deep, will you think of me in your eternal sleep? What do you think of as you watch the blood steadily flow from your veins? Are you numbed by this red river streaming down your arm? Are the tears that pour from your eyes tears of regret and sorrow or are they tears of relief? Was this the only way you could think of to wash away your pain? Dark shadows of past torture and remorse cover your face, your feelings are veiled by this same darkness. In your last breath, will you be thinking of me? Or will you slowly slip away from me in your silent misery of lonely regret?
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Eternal Sleep
Contributed by
Katie2008
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:14:16 PM in AEST
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You took your knife, your cut ran deep, will you think of me in your eternal sleep? What do you think of as you watch the blood steadily flow from your veins? Are you numbed by this red river streaming down your arm? Are the tears that pour from your eyes tears of regret and sorrow or are they tears of relief? Was this the only way you could think of to wash away your pain? Dark shadows of past torture and remorse cover your face, your feelings are veiled by this same darkness. In your last breath, will you be thinking of me? Or will you slowly slip away from me in your silent misery of lonely regret?
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Re: Eternal Sleep
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:33:29 PM AEST
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These type of poems or writes break my heart. You've done a good job of getting them to think before they act.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Eternal Sleep
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by Delusions on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:42:17 AM AEST
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| wow... i loved this... it seriously sent chills through me!!! Keep em coming ~delusions~ |
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Re: Eternal Sleep
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by darkfairy1188 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:26:16 PM AEST
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| katie, im sorry but i have to ask if this is about me. but its really good. u write beautiful poetry. i never even knew u wrote. |
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