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Array ( [sid] => 48093 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What I thought [time] => 2004-05-18 15:37:50 [hometext] => This poem is for this one boyfriend i had that took advantage of me but i am back on my feet now and all these boys that try to play me...You can't play a player [bodytext] => When I first met you,
i thought you were the one.
Little did I know the drama had just begun.
I thought the first few months were really bliss,
yet still in those same months we didn't even kiss.
When we first met, it felt so perfect
I thought that it was something that I would regret,
But this relationship was the worst yet,
I thought you were the one I'd actually spend my life with
But all you did was neglect me,
You neglected me in the worst ways I could think of.
i am really hurt by the way you treated me
When I wanted you, you were never near,
So i just said it wuz because you didn't care.
While you were treating me as if I dindn't matter
that wuz when I was fed up and couldn't take any more
I knew that I needed something new
You think I can't get hurt but I can.
When I asked you what was the solution
You blew me off andsaid you couldn't talk.
I don't think you know how much it hurts
to be in a relationship and trying to make it work.
The love I have for you is so great
you accusing me makes me weak.
sometimes I sit back and reminisce
on the first time you started acting like this.
I called you and asked if I should stop calling you
Your attitude said "It's up to you!"
When I see you now it's like the drama nevre ends
worst of all whenever you see me hanging with ma friends,
but anyways I still can't get used to the bullsh!t you're giving me.
You're breaking my herat, Oh boy can't you see.
I have really gotten to see the new you, the real you
Well you really had me fooled;
'Cuz I really thought you were actually cool.
I am sorry this is happening 'cuz
I can't eat, sleep or sh!t
because I am constantly thinking of your bullsh!t.
I'm not able to do nothing without thinking of you
I cannot believe that things are going to end this way,
I'm at a lost of words to say.
Life without you would be great,
but
A life with you would be even greater


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What I thought

Contributed by Missy_7290 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:37:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



When I first met you,
i thought you were the one.
Little did I know the drama had just begun.
I thought the first few months were really bliss,
yet still in those same months we didn't even kiss.
When we first met, it felt so perfect
I thought that it was something that I would regret,
But this relationship was the worst yet,
I thought you were the one I'd actually spend my life with
But all you did was neglect me,
You neglected me in the worst ways I could think of.
i am really hurt by the way you treated me
When I wanted you, you were never near,
So i just said it wuz because you didn't care.
While you were treating me as if I dindn't matter
that wuz when I was fed up and couldn't take any more
I knew that I needed something new
You think I can't get hurt but I can.
When I asked you what was the solution
You blew me off andsaid you couldn't talk.
I don't think you know how much it hurts
to be in a relationship and trying to make it work.
The love I have for you is so great
you accusing me makes me weak.
sometimes I sit back and reminisce
on the first time you started acting like this.
I called you and asked if I should stop calling you
Your attitude said "It's up to you!"
When I see you now it's like the drama nevre ends
worst of all whenever you see me hanging with ma friends,
but anyways I still can't get used to the bullsh!t you're giving me.
You're breaking my herat, Oh boy can't you see.
I have really gotten to see the new you, the real you
Well you really had me fooled;
'Cuz I really thought you were actually cool.
I am sorry this is happening 'cuz
I can't eat, sleep or sh!t
because I am constantly thinking of your bullsh!t.
I'm not able to do nothing without thinking of you
I cannot believe that things are going to end this way,
I'm at a lost of words to say.
Life without you would be great,
but
A life with you would be even greater






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Re: What I thought (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:54:50 PM AEST
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wow this is a very sad piece of art!! well done to you a terrific piece!!
'Life without you would be great,
but
A life with you would be even greater' nice ending too...

-feel free to comment on my poems...


Re: What I thought (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:06:06 PM AEST
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interesting write, feels like you're being pulled at both ends! ;0)
~Remy~




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