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Array ( [sid] => 48086 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT [time] => 2004-05-18 14:56:25 [hometext] => This is dedicated to all the fake friends of the world [bodytext] => Read and weep
You mis-guided sheep
My souls released
from your blood and bread feast
Breed and boast
You un-likely ghost
Now eat my sorrow
And as for tomorrow
I'll take you there
Tired to a chair
You'll take the pain
YOU WILL NOT COMPLAIN
WATCH MY BLOOD DRAIN
as I'm drowning in-sane
You are reeking of death
IT'S THERE on your breath
It's deep inside OF me
But is impossible to see
SO IF I WAS..
TO BLEED
RIGHT INFRONT OF YOU
TELL ME GOOD FRIEND
WHAT WOULD YOU DO?
Run and hide?
with both legs tide?
And both hands bound
scream, there'll be no sound
Behind these walls
They wont hear your calls
You're trapped inside
Now you're in my mind

WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT
FEEL MY BLOOD SPIT
WATCH THE VEINS SPRAY
SEE MY ARTERIES FRAY
LET THE BLOOD STAIN YOUR SKIN
AS I PIERCE WITH A PIN
MY HEART
I'LL PUSH IT RIGHT IN
LONG AND SLOW
So the pain's so intense
I'll loose all my sense
And i'll die there and then
But i ask you again
WHAT WOULD YOU DO TO HELP ME MY FRIEND?






[comments] => 8 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Another_Dimension [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT

Contributed by Another_Dimension on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:56:25 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Read and weep
You mis-guided sheep
My souls released
from your blood and bread feast
Breed and boast
You un-likely ghost
Now eat my sorrow
And as for tomorrow
I'll take you there
Tired to a chair
You'll take the pain
YOU WILL NOT COMPLAIN
WATCH MY BLOOD DRAIN
as I'm drowning in-sane
You are reeking of death
IT'S THERE on your breath
It's deep inside OF me
But is impossible to see
SO IF I WAS..
TO BLEED
RIGHT INFRONT OF YOU
TELL ME GOOD FRIEND
WHAT WOULD YOU DO?
Run and hide?
with both legs tide?
And both hands bound
scream, there'll be no sound
Behind these walls
They wont hear your calls
You're trapped inside
Now you're in my mind

WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT
FEEL MY BLOOD SPIT
WATCH THE VEINS SPRAY
SEE MY ARTERIES FRAY
LET THE BLOOD STAIN YOUR SKIN
AS I PIERCE WITH A PIN
MY HEART
I'LL PUSH IT RIGHT IN
LONG AND SLOW
So the pain's so intense
I'll loose all my sense
And i'll die there and then
But i ask you again
WHAT WOULD YOU DO TO HELP ME MY FRIEND?










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Re: WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:43:28 PM AEST
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Great work and very powerful. Keep em coming :O)

takecare,
Pixie xxx


Re: WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:53:09 PM AEST
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whoa... lol, sorry, laughing cuz i know you're yelling this REALLY LOUDLY to the bastards... strong write, awesome!! ;0)
~Remy~


Re: WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaded-Sunrise on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:17:35 PM AEST
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Hey I am going through the same thing now,I just "lost" my best friend because she decided she was going to be fake and no longer try in our relationship.You caught all the emotion that I feel.Thats the kind of poem I like,with lost of emotion.Good Job


Re: WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:49:55 PM AEST
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This really spoke to me, I can really relate. I'm going through the same thing, I'm sorry you are too. Great work, thanks for sharing it.
Katie


Re: WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:49:37 AM AEST
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Powerful write.
Thanks for writing.


Re: WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:47:51 AM AEST
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Well this is right up my street.. nice one x


Re: WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT (User Rating: 1 )
by Naughtygurl on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 12:29:36 PM AEST
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I like it , It sorta scares me to think about it.... But I like it..... I think it speaks to alot of people... I know it speaks to me.... I hope you wright more!


Re: WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 04:45:12 AM AEST
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This is an excellent write and i can really relate to it. well done ive really enjoyed your poetry so far. keep it coming!!




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