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But yet I loved you
Like a romance from long ago
I’d let you steal me
I’d sell my soul just to seal us
Last night, I dreamed light never came
I know it’s just a dream but do you feel the same?

I don’t know how I got here
Starlight, you’re the only thing I fear
Daylight, when you hold me I feel complete,
You’re not set to love – yet I feel your love from beneath my feet
Last night, I dreamed light never came
I know it’s just a dream but do you feel the same?

Friends don’t understand how we feel,
I could never harm you,
You were born to heel
This mixed up heart
You’re so much older,
Yet we can never be apart,
Last night, I dreamed light never came
I know it’s just a dream but do you feel the same?
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Buffy (Beneath my feet)

Contributed by Overstated on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:53:39 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Created as a monster
But yet I loved you
Like a romance from long ago
I’d let you steal me
I’d sell my soul just to seal us
Last night, I dreamed light never came
I know it’s just a dream but do you feel the same?

I don’t know how I got here
Starlight, you’re the only thing I fear
Daylight, when you hold me I feel complete,
You’re not set to love – yet I feel your love from beneath my feet
Last night, I dreamed light never came
I know it’s just a dream but do you feel the same?

Friends don’t understand how we feel,
I could never harm you,
You were born to heel
This mixed up heart
You’re so much older,
Yet we can never be apart,
Last night, I dreamed light never came
I know it’s just a dream but do you feel the same?

Copyright Â© Overstated ... [ 2004-05-18 13:53:39]
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Re: Buffy (Beneath my feet) (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:04:31 PM AEST
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this was really really good. i like the flow of it, very nice. somewhat sad but still amazing.
great work keep it up.
Arden

Re: Buffy (Beneath my feet) (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:22:56 PM AEST
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hum... i remember feeling this way... interesting write, pleading for an answer no doubt, but still good... ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Buffy (Beneath my feet) (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:43:48 PM AEST
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very nice, wonderful flow, and it almost looks like a champane glass, a lill rearranging and it would be:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Buffy (Beneath my feet) (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:49:58 PM AEST
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Author note:

lol yes it does look a bit like a champane glass - i'd like to point out that this is not intentional though it does show my talents never end not just a poem - but a piece of art aswell!!! lol

:)

p.s thank you for all your kind comments so far...

-OVERSTATED-

Re: Buffy (Beneath my feet) (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:42:00 PM AEST
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this is a really great poem! i look forward to reading ur next one. keep up the good work!
~allyson~

Re: Buffy (Beneath my feet) (User Rating: 1 )
by kittie30 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:43:20 PM AEST
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very good poem i liked it

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