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My happiness can never last
Death in the shape of a stake,
My suffering vaster than a lake
As pure as a swan,
Baby I’ve watched you for so long
Tonite you wouldn’t understand,
So many shadows make up a man

I’ve seen you run, I’ve seen you hide
I’ve held you as you cried
We hold hands when we say goodbye
Swore to each other that we’d never die…
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Angel (Shadows Make up a Man)

Contributed by Overstated on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:52:48 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The long days fold so fast,
My happiness can never last
Death in the shape of a stake,
My suffering vaster than a lake
As pure as a swan,
Baby I’ve watched you for so long
Tonite you wouldn’t understand,
So many shadows make up a man

I’ve seen you run, I’ve seen you hide
I’ve held you as you cried
We hold hands when we say goodbye
Swore to each other that we’d never die…

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Re: Angel (Shadows Make up a Man) (User Rating: 1 )
by kittie30 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:02:18 PM AEST
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that was an awesome poem u did a great job

Re: Angel (Shadows Make up a Man) (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:16:22 PM AEST
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this is sad..

The long days fold so fast,
My happiness can never last
Death in the shape of a stake,
My suffering vaster than a lake

i loved those lines. this was wonderfully done.
great work. i look forward to more :)
Arden

Re: Angel (Shadows Make up a Man) (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:26:31 PM AEST
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simple tinglings of love go a long way... i like this... ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Angel (Shadows Make up a Man) (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:46:02 PM AEST
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that was so good!!! very nice flow to it and a really good read. keep up the good work and sumday u might get published if ur not already!! thanx for the good read!!!!
~allyson~

Re: Angel (Shadows Make up a Man) (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:57:41 AM AEST
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truly beautiful :)

Re: Angel (Shadows Make up a Man) (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:45:18 AM AEST
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Very short and sweet. To the point. Nice write. Kudos!
Thumps ; 0)

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