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Array ( [sid] => 48065 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => see you, see me [time] => 2004-05-18 13:20:19 [hometext] => pleaze comment!!! [bodytext] => you turn your head
and see my face
you walk toward me
at a steady pace.

i turn around
and see you there
i walk away
and begin to glare.

you keep on walking
and pretend not to see
the evil look
i gave to thee.

i turn to see
if you still walk towards me
i finally stop
when your two yards in back of me.

once again
i glare at thee
i want to know
why you follow me.

you look at me
with eyes of blue
then you ask me if
i'll go out with you.

i look into
your eyes so blue
and ask you why
you want me and you.

you tell me why
then i begin to blush
i guess i have
a little crush. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 54 [informant] => shorty_52 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

see you, see me

Contributed by shorty_52 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:20:19 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

you turn your head
and see my face
you walk toward me
at a steady pace.

i turn around
and see you there
i walk away
and begin to glare.

you keep on walking
and pretend not to see
the evil look
i gave to thee.

i turn to see
if you still walk towards me
i finally stop
when your two yards in back of me.

once again
i glare at thee
i want to know
why you follow me.

you look at me
with eyes of blue
then you ask me if
i'll go out with you.

i look into
your eyes so blue
and ask you why
you want me and you.

you tell me why
then i begin to blush
i guess i have
a little crush.

Copyright © shorty_52 ... [ 2004-05-18 13:20:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: see you, see me (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:59:09 PM AEST
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bloody hell! this was very good - felt so detailed then i look at the appearance and it looks so short - well done its very interesting - especially love last 4 lines very sweet...

-feel free to comment on mine btw...

Re: see you, see me (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:49:24 PM AEST
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so descriptive and its just like that no matter how hard you try to fight the feeling

wayne

Re: see you, see me (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:41:23 PM AEST
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damn... i'd pee my pants if i got that glare!!
~Remy~

Re: see you, see me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:04:40 PM AEST
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ahh, but it was the glare that won my heart.
keep writing!

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