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Array ( [sid] => 47963 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => now gravity kills [time] => 2004-05-17 18:11:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => were losing control
emotion is over coming our closed in minds
emotion seeping through the drains
into our hearts
pour out of our eyes
and feel the inside
it hurts
heart made of thorns
stabbing at our minds
draining our emotion
emotion becomes tears

cry
cry to the world
no one hears
stabbed minds
beating hearts
faliling to keep beating
dying
falling into the shadows
black holes inside our stabbed
minds
now gravity kills [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 32 [informant] => lexxie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

now gravity kills

Contributed by lexxie on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:11:23 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

were losing control
emotion is over coming our closed in minds
emotion seeping through the drains
into our hearts
pour out of our eyes
and feel the inside
it hurts
heart made of thorns
stabbing at our minds
draining our emotion
emotion becomes tears

cry
cry to the world
no one hears
stabbed minds
beating hearts
faliling to keep beating
dying
falling into the shadows
black holes inside our stabbed
minds
now gravity kills

Copyright © lexxie ... [ 2004-05-17 18:11:23]
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Re: now gravity kills (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:58:17 AM AEST
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nice job. didn't i read in your profile that you're 13 years old? if so- WOW. keep writing.

Re: now gravity kills (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 10:52:51 AM AEST
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if you truly are 13, as the last commenter said, then keep it up. there are LOTS of amazing writers that are very young, and lots of poets in general that write very maturely, yourself included.

i love this poem...very deep, and dark...the best poems always just bleed with raw emotion.

i absolutely love it.

- Bethani -
(15 yrs. old)

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