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I was wrong
Contributed by
mickie
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:49:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My eyes are tired from holding the tears back...
Rivers of pain torture my system.
I feel trapped in my own despair,
with no place to go.
I no longer feel safe,
I am betrayed.
I thought I could win this battle,
I thought I had what it took...
But no, I was wrong.
Copyright ©
mickie
... [
2004-05-17 11:49:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I was wrong
(User Rating: 1 ) by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:01:40 PM AEST (User
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GREAT EMOTION NICE WRITE
I LIKE
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Re: I was wrong
(User Rating: 1 ) by reilt on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:17:20 PM AEST (User
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very powerful write, i thougt it was very thought provoking and emotive |
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