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More time
Contributed by
alwys2nv
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:31:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The cuts are getting longer
the knife is going deeper
as my skin comes apart
i feel more of the snesation that i ever felt before
before i take my life tonight
i tell my self that its alright
all the suffering that i endured
after today i feel it no more
right before i take the knife i carefully turn off all of the lights
this sensation that i always been eurning for is'nt my salvation but my eternal damn nation
i take the knife and close my eyes
and begin to raise my arm
this knife i hold is my way out
to end my everlasting harm
as i slowly cut a line
slowly down my wrist
as i fall i begin to cry
and had second thoughts to die
on this day i took the knife
and quickly ended my life
on this day i took my life i wish i had more time
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Re: More time
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:02:33 AM AEST
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were you writing this to make people think about suicide?
if you were then i hope you get there. i'm trying to give it up my-self, but if i wasn't i think that this would help change my mind. |
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Re: More time
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by purplestary on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:08:36 AM AEST
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| very good write. hope you weren't really thinking about that.. if so i'm glad you had second thoughts. |
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