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will you
Contributed by
shorty_52
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:21:34 PM in AEST
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will you sleep tonight,
or will you think of me?
will you close your eyes,
and see inside of me?
it's times like this
when i see your face
my eyes are closed
and my hearts at rest.
i love you more
than you will ever know
so tell me this
cause i've got to know.
will you sleep tonight,
or will you think of me?
will you close your eyes,
and see inside of me?
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Re: will you
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:35:51 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful... thanks for sharing. |
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Re: will you
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 09:06:11 PM AEST
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| Nicely done - but not overdone. Sometimes, as is the case here, you don't need a lot of words to say a lot. Good write! |
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Re: will you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 09:12:15 PM AEST
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| I love you more than you know. everyday do I think about you. Thank you :) |
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Re: will you
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by swiftsouljah on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:05:52 PM AEST
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great job... i dont know how many times ive wondered that same thing...
wayne |
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