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I must have failed
Contributed by
alwys2nv
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 07:36:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Life was supposed to be this gift
that everyone recieves
instead my life is this nightmare that haunts me like my dreams
they only see the outside and they seem to think im fine
but every time they turn i always seem to cry
they never see the pain im goin through so they always seem to pass by
but after tonight they all will know about how much i hurt
I'll cut myself long and deep to show this horrid world
my mind is made it cannot be changed as im walking to my room
when i turn to lock the door it feels like im sentenced to my doom
no more thoughts are going through my head
as i go to reach for my knife
as of now there's no turnning back
im destined to take my life
as its slidding across my skin
i do not stop when its running thin
i do ont stop with one cut, no
but several on my wrist
but i do not stop with one wrist i do the other as well
i'm begining to lay on the ground
as the blood begins to trickle down
and this one thought is going through my head as it did many times before
thought life was supposed to be worth wild
but obvisiouly lies prevailed
i can't believe that im still breathing
again i must have failed
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alwys2nv
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2004-05-16 19:36:58]
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Re: I must have failed
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by shorty_52 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 07:47:59 PM AEST
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this was so good. and i am sorry if u truely feel that way. if u ever want to talk i'm here.
~allyson~ |
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Re: I must have failed
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 09:13:00 PM AEST
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| That was amazing. |
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