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So unique
Rough around the edges
A heart full of pain and confusion

A face so lovely
A heart so kind
Past experiences hidden

More mysterious than Mona Lisa
Eyes that shine with love
and with pain all at the same time

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Mysterious Figure

Contributed by creed on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:48:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

So simple
So unique
Rough around the edges
A heart full of pain and confusion

A face so lovely
A heart so kind
Past experiences hidden

More mysterious than Mona Lisa
Eyes that shine with love
and with pain all at the same time

Copyright © creed ... [ 2004-05-16 18:48:53]
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Re: Mysterious Figure (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:57:07 PM AEST
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Some people to subdue their pain with love and kindness. Makes you think what a strong individual they are, doesn't it. I marvel at the strength it takes to do that.

Rita

Re: Mysterious Figure (User Rating: 1 )
by creed on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:59:27 PM AEST
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yeah. it really does make you realize how strong of a person that they are. That's what's horrible though, they're the only people that can really show true kindness.

Re: Mysterious Figure (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:41:35 AM AEST
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Good people are hard to come by. oh and i like the mona lisa line heh heh i've see that somewhere before...i wonder where...lol..good work again love.

Re: Mysterious Figure (User Rating: 1 )
by creed on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 12:44:10 PM AEST
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lol. yeah i kind of stole the mona lisa thing from you...i couldnt remember how you phrased it though, so i just phrased it my own way.

Re: Mysterious Figure (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 08:37:07 PM AEST
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as mysterious as mona lisa's smile I used it as a description of you

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