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Let my love through you
Contributed by
luckycharm
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 09:50:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Let my love run through you,
And let it mend your heart,
Touch the darkness of your soul,
Let my love rebuild the pieces so love,
Can reunite us as one,
I know my love will,
Find it's way to your heart,
And you will see that I care,
So much for you that,
If you left me I would cry,
Let my love run through you,
When you nights are cold,
And you just can't be alone,
You know that I would never leave you,
Cause I love you in my heart,
And in my inner soul,
He can feel my love runing,
Right through his vains,
This love that I have for him,
Is so special inside,
Let our love run through each other,
So we both know we care,
As he takes his arms,
And wraps them around me,
I feel so protected,
And when he looks in my eyes,
I will be the girl he has always fantasized,
In his dreams,
For I'll never hurt you, so,
Let my love run through you
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2004-05-16 09:50:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Let my love through you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:44:55 AM AEST (User
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Hey girlie
doing alright. hope so.
I thought your poem was good.
Not to knock you but I had some advice.
When your were using him and you in the poem It would of been easier to read if you would of used one or the other. It was a good poem. I just had to read twice for the flow. |
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