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I remember you and me sitting on the beach
Holding our hands with love while sunset down
I felt warm when I rest my head on your chest for a while
I heard your heart saying me 'I love you'
I felt so good and I dreamed my future going to be filled with love
But following day you came with heart breaking story
I never thought your heart will become a nightmare for me
And your words are pierced in to my heart like a knife
How can you love someone when you hold my hands
Don't you know how much loved you and cared you
Your love and your words are so meant to me
My tears from eyes will tell you how much I miss you
You have given your heart to some one who you think
love you more than me.
You can leave me but remember my tears never
stop fall down my eyes for you and my heart never stop
saying your name all the time.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam
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Why my love?...........

Contributed by ravisada on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:57:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When I recollect my days with you
I remember you and me sitting on the beach
Holding our hands with love while sunset down
I felt warm when I rest my head on your chest for a while
I heard your heart saying me 'I love you'
I felt so good and I dreamed my future going to be filled with love
But following day you came with heart breaking story
I never thought your heart will become a nightmare for me
And your words are pierced in to my heart like a knife
How can you love someone when you hold my hands
Don't you know how much loved you and cared you
Your love and your words are so meant to me
My tears from eyes will tell you how much I miss you
You have given your heart to some one who you think
love you more than me.
You can leave me but remember my tears never
stop fall down my eyes for you and my heart never stop
saying your name all the time.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam

Copyright Â© ravisada ... [ 2004-05-16 01:57:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Why my love?........... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 02:26:59 AM AEST
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such an emotional and loyal write...
beautiful yet heartbreaking and sad...
i liked the end the most..
keep it up,
katie

Re: Why my love?........... (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 04:14:32 AM AEST
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beautiful and heartwrenching. great write

Re: Why my love?........... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:00:32 PM AEST
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Oh Ravi so sad Im so sorry!! This is heart breaking my friend

Michelle

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