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i have this memory of this kid that was to weak so he let go
he always used to cut himself to be sane for a while
but everytime that he come back he was always in denial
no one was there to help him to end his lasting pain
no one was there to help to end his suffering
for he showed signs of suicide
but they just figured that he be all right
one night his pain was to much to bare
so he just looked in the mirror and just stared
he put the razor in his hand and grabbed it very tight
but he knew things would end after this horrible night
as he held the razor in his hand he went to cut his wrist
when the feeling of relief went through his fist he knew he did not miss
he wished there was some one there to help him make it through his pain
but there was no one just him and he had nothing else left to do
from this point the memory fades
because this boy could'nt be saved
from all his sorrows and all his pain
there was no one else to blame
i think you know him you've might have seen
because this boy
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Me

Contributed by alwys2nv on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 07:07:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

i have this memory of this kid i used to know
i have this memory of this kid that was to weak so he let go
he always used to cut himself to be sane for a while
but everytime that he come back he was always in denial
no one was there to help him to end his lasting pain
no one was there to help to end his suffering
for he showed signs of suicide
but they just figured that he be all right
one night his pain was to much to bare
so he just looked in the mirror and just stared
he put the razor in his hand and grabbed it very tight
but he knew things would end after this horrible night
as he held the razor in his hand he went to cut his wrist
when the feeling of relief went through his fist he knew he did not miss
he wished there was some one there to help him make it through his pain
but there was no one just him and he had nothing else left to do
from this point the memory fades
because this boy could'nt be saved
from all his sorrows and all his pain
there was no one else to blame
i think you know him you've might have seen
because this boy
this boy was me

Copyright © alwys2nv ... [ 2004-05-15 19:07:04]
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Re: Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 07:09:27 PM AEST
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very touching write, thank you for shareing this

Re: Me (User Rating: 1 )
by DirtyFool on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:14:47 PM AEST
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Very deep. Amazing!!!!!! I loved it. Although i hope everything is ok

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