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Array ( [sid] => 47680 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TONIGHT [time] => 2004-05-15 18:52:50 [hometext] => Is it ever too late, to ask for one last chance with the one you love? I'm optimistic, and praying the answer is no. I hope if anyone else feels like I do, they will find inspiration in these words. I had a song in mind when I wrote this. [bodytext] => Can you see the loneliness
That’s written on my face?
I can’t find a way to hide it
I have to live with my disgrace.

I know now all the things I did
And what I did so wrong
But looking back with deep regret
I can’t forget, the love so strong.

I can’t make it without you
I don’t even want to try
Your love is all that matters
Without you my heart would die.
Give me one last final chance
I promise I’ll make it right
I’ll be the man you wanted
The one you could hold...Tonight.

If only you’d say yes to that
And let me prove it’s all true
We could put the past behind us
And I could make love to you.

I won’t make the same mistakes again
I’ve learned my lesson all too well
Being apart from you so long
Was how I had imagined my hell.

Cause I can’t make it without you
I don’t even want to try
Your love is all that matters
Without you my heart would die.
Give me one last final chance
I promise I’ll make it right
I’ll be the man you wanted
The one you could hold...Tonight.

I’m sorry, will never be good enough
And you deserve, oh, so much more
But let me hold you all night long
And show you love, better than we had before.
I promise my everything to you
If you only give us one more try
We’re still in love, so don’t hold back
I know that you can see it in my eyes.

I just want to be...
I just need to be...
We just need to try...
Baby, one more time...

I’ll be the man you wanted...
I swear, I’ll be the man you wanted...
I promise, I’ll be the man you wanted...
The one you could hold...Tonight.

The one who wants to hold you...Tonight.

So honey let me hold you...TONIGHT. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Joker17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
TONIGHT

Contributed by Joker17 on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 06:52:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Can you see the loneliness
That’s written on my face?
I can’t find a way to hide it
I have to live with my disgrace.

I know now all the things I did
And what I did so wrong
But looking back with deep regret
I can’t forget, the love so strong.

I can’t make it without you
I don’t even want to try
Your love is all that matters
Without you my heart would die.
Give me one last final chance
I promise I’ll make it right
I’ll be the man you wanted
The one you could hold...Tonight.

If only you’d say yes to that
And let me prove it’s all true
We could put the past behind us
And I could make love to you.

I won’t make the same mistakes again
I’ve learned my lesson all too well
Being apart from you so long
Was how I had imagined my hell.

Cause I can’t make it without you
I don’t even want to try
Your love is all that matters
Without you my heart would die.
Give me one last final chance
I promise I’ll make it right
I’ll be the man you wanted
The one you could hold...Tonight.

I’m sorry, will never be good enough
And you deserve, oh, so much more
But let me hold you all night long
And show you love, better than we had before.
I promise my everything to you
If you only give us one more try
We’re still in love, so don’t hold back
I know that you can see it in my eyes.

I just want to be...
I just need to be...
We just need to try...
Baby, one more time...

I’ll be the man you wanted...
I swear, I’ll be the man you wanted...
I promise, I’ll be the man you wanted...
The one you could hold...Tonight.

The one who wants to hold you...Tonight.

So honey let me hold you...TONIGHT.




Copyright © Joker17 ... [ 2004-05-15 18:52:50]
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Re: TONIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:30:29 PM AEST
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this touched my heart very much i am a situation right now where i am not with the one i truley love and i wish the one i really do want to be with would try to write something like this... once again great write


Re: TONIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:02:43 PM AEST
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Wonderful write. Keep up the great work!




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