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Array ( [sid] => 47657 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Oblivious [time] => 2004-05-15 15:55:49 [hometext] => I loved him and now he is gone...erased from my life...its all my fault!!! [bodytext] => "Oblivious"

Whenever your around
You make it for me safe and sound
We would laugh and cry
Say we壇 be together till we died
With you I act myself
You池e the one who knows what I知 really about
I think I知 in love, and that痴 without a doubt
I知 the one you can稚 live without
I知 the one who is always by you
I知 even the one star struck when I see you
You were perfect so I thought
I saw your flaws
Bur never fought
Oblivious is how you make me feel
So unlikely not even real
I feel I知 in a fantasy land
You and me hand in hand
When I speak you tell me that I知 cute
I wanna throw my arms around you
I undergo a heartbroken moment
As soon as I see I知 without
Oblivious is how you made me feel
So unlikely not even real
I feel my fantasy land disappear
Then my fear starts to appear

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Oblivious

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 03:55:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



"Oblivious"

Whenever your around
You make it for me safe and sound
We would laugh and cry
Say we壇 be together till we died
With you I act myself
You池e the one who knows what I知 really about
I think I知 in love, and that痴 without a doubt
I知 the one you can稚 live without
I知 the one who is always by you
I知 even the one star struck when I see you
You were perfect so I thought
I saw your flaws
Bur never fought
Oblivious is how you make me feel
So unlikely not even real
I feel I知 in a fantasy land
You and me hand in hand
When I speak you tell me that I知 cute
I wanna throw my arms around you
I undergo a heartbroken moment
As soon as I see I知 without
Oblivious is how you made me feel
So unlikely not even real
I feel my fantasy land disappear
Then my fear starts to appear





Copyright ツゥ Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-05-15 15:55:49]
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Re: Oblivious (User Rating: 1 )
by Another_Dimension on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:02:14 AM AEST
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I can empathize with you very much you know, ever want to talk. message me x


Re: Oblivious (User Rating: 1 )
by Ethereal_Engine on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:10:42 PM AEST
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I was never involved in poetry much until I started posting things here. I read things from time to time, but mostly stick with fantasy-type poems. I sympathize with what ever happend between you and who your writing this about. Im going to say what I said to Erin (the one I was talking to when I wrote sleeps and sheeps). At one point please try to write something light, stop thinking about heavy moments for a little while and write something happy. I hope this doesn't sound insensitive, but things dont always have to be dark...ive noticed alot of people here write some depressing things related to love troubles...and if writing helps ease the pain then write dark if you must...but perhaps if you write something light you will in turn feel light as well. As for the poem...unfortunatly I am not a critic....I thought it was well written and I like how you called your happy times fantasy land.




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