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As I lay there so stiff and so frightened,
Shall I scream or shout for help?
But I didn't dare utter so much as a yelp.

I can still remember the feeling I got,
Sour alcohol breath that was revoltiingly hot,
It made me so dizzy and so sick,
I begged in my mind for it to be over quick.

After the sick perverted deed was done,
I knew that my quantam leap from child to womanhood had begun,
All of my child like innocence had been stolen in one act,
I knew then from that day, I could never look back.

Now 8years later I can still feel his presence,
That foul creature has left me a life sentence,
An eternity in prison could never possibly be,
Enough for what that predator did to me. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 48 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Rape

Contributed by pixie on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:08:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

All sorts of things flashed through my mind,
As I lay there so stiff and so frightened,
Shall I scream or shout for help?
But I didn't dare utter so much as a yelp.

I can still remember the feeling I got,
Sour alcohol breath that was revoltiingly hot,
It made me so dizzy and so sick,
I begged in my mind for it to be over quick.

After the sick perverted deed was done,
I knew that my quantam leap from child to womanhood had begun,
All of my child like innocence had been stolen in one act,
I knew then from that day, I could never look back.

Now 8years later I can still feel his presence,
That foul creature has left me a life sentence,
An eternity in prison could never possibly be,
Enough for what that predator did to me.

Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-05-15 13:08:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by faithmairee on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:18:05 PM AEST
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Pixie-This one nearly brought tears to my eyes...excellent writing on a difficult topic,,, you captured the nightmare of fear and pain so well..

faith

Re: Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:22:38 PM AEST
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Well I thought, nothing could make me mad today and your poem did.. so sorry that you went through this. one of these days the man will be punished. I liked how you wrote this poem. thanks for sharing. take care.. sandy

Re: Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 03:21:11 PM AEST
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OMG!! I'm praying that you have a great imagination and this is just a poem....but something tells me it's not. I am sorry if you had to endure this. It makes my blood boil when I hear of these things.
You are a very strong woman to write about this so beautifully...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 03:33:36 PM AEST
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Words escape me at this moment....this is so sad
so emotional.

Re: Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 05:46:05 PM AEST
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i pray this is just a good write, if not, I pray that the circle close appropiately and soon.
very emotional. thanks for sharing.

Re: Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by XxPerfectlySanexX on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:18:20 AM AEST
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Extremely emotional and really captures the pain women and men go through every day, everywhere.
Thanks for sharing that really amazing poem with us, I hope it's not a personal experience...
Take care; PerfectlySanex

Re: Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by krisseee on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:13:19 AM AEST
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good write. don't think about the animal, he'll meet his maker, and justice will be done, probably not in this life, but in his next.
anyway, was well written.

Re: Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by Gunda on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:56:35 PM AEST
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A really good write, i wish I could say that it will get better when time goes by, but unfortantly we bouth know that that is a lie...
Thanx for sharing, it was amazing...

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