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Caressing the cheek on its journey down
Clinging to the end of the nose
They spill from the eyes
(they cant hold it in)
And from the heart at the same time
(somebody fix it)
They hug The face until they hit the floor just as The hugs we hope they inspire hold on until we Crash
(hold me, dont let go)
And I suppose we must crash to rise and stand Tall
To prevail, to grow

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Tears of Thunder and Satin

Contributed by evryrose on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 03:54:09 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Salty tears stain the lips of what used to be a Smile
Caressing the cheek on its journey down
Clinging to the end of the nose
They spill from the eyes
(they cant hold it in)
And from the heart at the same time
(somebody fix it)
They hug The face until they hit the floor just as The hugs we hope they inspire hold on until we Crash
(hold me, dont let go)
And I suppose we must crash to rise and stand Tall
To prevail, to grow

Copyright © evryrose ... [ 2004-05-15 03:54:09]
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Re: Tears of Thunder and Satin (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 05:01:13 AM AEST
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filled with emotion and sadness. wonderful imagery. a very well done write. i enjoyed it. keep up the awesome works.
Arden

Re: Tears of Thunder and Satin (User Rating: 1 )
by SavingMarion on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 06:03:08 AM AEST
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great job!!

Re: Tears of Thunder and Satin (User Rating: 1 )
by intelectualpoet on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 02:10:35 AM AEST
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Baby...As I read through this poem, I feel not only what you are feeling, but how I am feeling the same way... I will never let you go, know that and believe it to be true my love, for my heart will tell no lies.

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