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Array ( [sid] => 47534 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Everything [time] => 2004-05-14 16:41:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Me I Myself
Not here or there
just wandering
an empty soul
broken by the world
its shattered remains seeking refuge
but she is here an she has a soul all together never broken
so is she just a spirit a dream or is she solid
no one knows but she has presence here in your head your mind your thoughts your life your everything she is here an she is not
so complex you only release her once and once only
because she has you
an you had her she takes you on an on an on
to the place
the place is where she is an you an everything is it is the place

so whether you are here or not beleive in yourself when no one else does.. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 48 [informant] => dying_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Everything

Contributed by dying_angel on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:41:16 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Me I Myself
Not here or there
just wandering
an empty soul
broken by the world
its shattered remains seeking refuge
but she is here an she has a soul all together never broken
so is she just a spirit a dream or is she solid
no one knows but she has presence here in your head your mind your thoughts your life your everything she is here an she is not
so complex you only release her once and once only
because she has you
an you had her she takes you on an on an on
to the place
the place is where she is an you an everything is it is the place

so whether you are here or not beleive in yourself when no one else does..

Copyright © dying_angel ... [ 2004-05-14 16:41:16]
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Re: Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:55:03 PM AEST
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this is good

Re: Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:08:25 PM AEST
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Impressive.

The type of poem you read, mutter "whoa" under your breath about, blink, reread it, read it a third time to dredge that last bit of meaning out, and then realize you STILL don't get it and read it a thousand times more, understanding something new, getting something more out of it, every time.

I really, really, really like it when a poem is like that :).

--Nora

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