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Feet of under hurt so much no way to turn
As a young boy i looked for guidence
Day by day i feel their abscence
All i want is to be the norm
Yet for me the life is nothing but the storm
I sit and whatch the sun a turning
I know again another day dawning
For me tomorrow and yesterday a same
A morning bright so filled with pain
Shall i say a comfort of her will take it away
Inside a lonely place no she can cure
For me days too long i seek no more
For what i know and what i learnt
Every day is a new discovery
Yet to know a price so dear
So easy to be the square
I say hide and try not to stare
Inside the warm place for those who know
Dont look too long theres no escape
If u embrace its lonely place..
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 13 [informant] => mindset [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Lost Vision

Contributed by mindset on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:34:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

For years now i walked the road of stone
Feet of under hurt so much no way to turn
As a young boy i looked for guidence
Day by day i feel their abscence
All i want is to be the norm
Yet for me the life is nothing but the storm
I sit and whatch the sun a turning
I know again another day dawning
For me tomorrow and yesterday a same
A morning bright so filled with pain
Shall i say a comfort of her will take it away
Inside a lonely place no she can cure
For me days too long i seek no more
For what i know and what i learnt
Every day is a new discovery
Yet to know a price so dear
So easy to be the square
I say hide and try not to stare
Inside the warm place for those who know
Dont look too long theres no escape
If u embrace its lonely place..

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Re: Lost Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:52:56 PM AEST
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This is really beautiful, and with a spell check/edit it would be even bettert!!
Welcome to YPDC...
Jenni

Re: Lost Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by mindset on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 05:00:15 PM AEST
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what you see the words or the spelling mistake

Re: Lost Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:18:10 PM AEST
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Nice and emotional . . . well done. I do have to agree with Jenni, though. It's good, don't get me wrong, and smoothing out the spelling errors would make it even better . . . the fact is, using chatroom type spellings like "u" for 'you' detracts a bit from your poem . . . which is all that Jenni meant, and as a friendly bit of advice. Please take no offense.

--Nora

Re: Lost Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by mindset on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:07:23 PM AEST
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its down to being drunk and liveing day be day....

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