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Array ( [sid] => 47516 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tear Drop [time] => 2004-05-14 15:11:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You struggle day and night
Never giving up the fight
Holding in the hurt and tears
All the pain from all the years

Your eyes water and strain
No longer can you hold the pain
A tear begins to fall from your eye
You know that you are going to cry

The tear starts to roll down your cheek
Feeling as if you hadn’t sleep in a week
It slices as it rolls down your face
As if it was the slowest race

Your face is cut with loves painful teardrop
No matter what the hurt won’t stop
At least not until the last tear has fallen
Or another painful memory comes callin
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Tear Drop

Contributed by blue-amy on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 03:11:37 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You struggle day and night
Never giving up the fight
Holding in the hurt and tears
All the pain from all the years

Your eyes water and strain
No longer can you hold the pain
A tear begins to fall from your eye
You know that you are going to cry

The tear starts to roll down your cheek
Feeling as if you hadn’t sleep in a week
It slices as it rolls down your face
As if it was the slowest race

Your face is cut with loves painful teardrop
No matter what the hurt won’t stop
At least not until the last tear has fallen
Or another painful memory comes callin

Copyright Â© blue-amy ... [ 2004-05-14 15:11:37]
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Re: Tear Drop (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:04:50 PM AEST
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NICE WRITE

Re: Tear Drop (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:56:31 PM AEST
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wow, this is really great! I liked the way you put this together, It really is an emotional read

Re: Tear Drop (User Rating: 1 )
by Anesthetic on Tuesday, 26th February 2008 @ 03:27:03 PM AEST
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That was some amazing write, it really flowed together, which got the emotion across cleanly and really hard hitting. Keep up the good work.
~Charli~

Re: Tear Drop (User Rating: 1 )
by pinkunicornoctober on Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 06:08:54 AM AEST
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I LOVE this! Very good description! GREAT JOB!

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