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I trust no one with my fears
I hide my pain behind my tears
I have no one to turn to or count on
Everyone I had is now gone
I wish to end this aching pain
So now I'll try yet again
I write a letter neat and long
Then I'll title it "when I'm gone"
To my lover I will write
Love another with all your might
To family I now write
Look what has become of our stupid fight
The letter now I do end
Hoping broken hearts will mend
I look around for a knife
Hoping to end my lonesome life
Now I look around in glee
For my soul will finally be free
I owe it to the blade of knife
Do not fear death, fear the unlived life

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The Unlived Life

Contributed by blue-amy on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I trust no one with my fears
I hide my pain behind my tears
I have no one to turn to or count on
Everyone I had is now gone
I wish to end this aching pain
So now I'll try yet again
I write a letter neat and long
Then I'll title it "when I'm gone"
To my lover I will write
Love another with all your might
To family I now write
Look what has become of our stupid fight
The letter now I do end
Hoping broken hearts will mend
I look around for a knife
Hoping to end my lonesome life
Now I look around in glee
For my soul will finally be free
I owe it to the blade of knife
Do not fear death, fear the unlived life

Copyright © blue-amy ... [ 2004-05-14 13:33:45]
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Re: The Unlived Life (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:39:44 PM AEST
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Wow,

I can relate to this too well,
It is very well written,very emotional. great stuff.

Pixie xxxx

Re: The Unlived Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:57:20 PM AEST
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Very powerful write.
I hope it's not true.
It was magnificent in the wording.
Felt very emotional in charge.

Re: The Unlived Life (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 02:04:51 PM AEST
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Other than being cliche in every line, it's not that bad.

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