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Her crooked smile gave your mind the disease
She inched it further, adding to the tease
For the money, she never would cease
She often pondered the worth of it all
Picking the role, was her user's call
She'd play a long, no matter what
Never a bruise, hardly a cut
Her pride had long since washed away
And her dignity was close to decay
She wanted to quit, but never could
If she got a chance, maybe she would
She longed for the silver screen,
Where maybe she'd be treated like a queen
Instead of a cast away sore
Who's life was happy no more
For an hour each day, she prayed
For him to come and take her away
But her only satisfaction
Came from the men with dollars of Jackson [comments] => 6 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 25 [informant] => ChristopherFriedrich [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

23 Hour Swinger

Contributed by ChristopherFriedrich on Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 09:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

She never met a man she didn't please
Her crooked smile gave your mind the disease
She inched it further, adding to the tease
For the money, she never would cease
She often pondered the worth of it all
Picking the role, was her user's call
She'd play a long, no matter what
Never a bruise, hardly a cut
Her pride had long since washed away
And her dignity was close to decay
She wanted to quit, but never could
If she got a chance, maybe she would
She longed for the silver screen,
Where maybe she'd be treated like a queen
Instead of a cast away sore
Who's life was happy no more
For an hour each day, she prayed
For him to come and take her away
But her only satisfaction
Came from the men with dollars of Jackson

Copyright © ChristopherFriedrich ... [ 2002-10-08 09:15:00]
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Re: 23 Hour Swinger (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 04:33:12 PM AEST
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your right you don't see poems about prostitutes often lol, but yours was an awesome write..seems like you have em' down pretty good...

Lasca

Re: 23 Hour Swinger (User Rating: 1 )
by herbleaf23 on Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 06:47:06 PM AEST
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this reminds me of my job.

Re: 23 Hour Swinger (User Rating: 1 )
by GEQUETSCHT on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 11:39:56 AM AEST
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THIS IS A REALLY GOOD WRITER.

Ali

Re: 23 Hour Swinger (User Rating: 1 )
by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 01:56:16 PM AEST
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very interesting ... well written for sure.. great stuff

Re: 23 Hour Swinger (User Rating: 1 )
by Lady_Bubbles420 on Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 05:20:56 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem. Even though I don't often like poems with rhymn schemes, you pulled it off nicely. Good work!

Re: 23 Hour Swinger (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 09:21:25 AM AEST
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Am I really old enough to read this? P.S. I'm in 8th grade. this is so disgusting, BUT IT RHYMES GOOD JOB!!!!

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