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By: Danielle

I gave you a call
You were gasping for air
I tell you c’mon this isn’t fair
You blame me for leaving you
Stranded and alone
You told me Good-Bye
Then threw your phone
It isn’t as hard as your pretending to be
So locked up
Trying hard not to give up on me
This night
Was the first night
I truly hated you
This night was the first night
I could have gave up on you
I stuck with you
Pretending I couldn’t live without you
I gave you a call
Your were gasping for air
I say wait c’mon this isn’t fair
This night was the first night
I truly hated you
This night was the first night
I could have gave up on you
This night
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This Night

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:12:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

“This Night”
By: Danielle

I gave you a call
You were gasping for air
I tell you c’mon this isn’t fair
You blame me for leaving you
Stranded and alone
You told me Good-Bye
Then threw your phone
It isn’t as hard as your pretending to be
So locked up
Trying hard not to give up on me
This night
Was the first night
I truly hated you
This night was the first night
I could have gave up on you
I stuck with you
Pretending I couldn’t live without you
I gave you a call
Your were gasping for air
I say wait c’mon this isn’t fair
This night was the first night
I truly hated you
This night was the first night
I could have gave up on you
This night

Copyright Â© Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-05-13 23:12:55]
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Re: This Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:06:59 AM AEST
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I have been here. For me it all worked out because in the end, she called me again.

Re: This Night (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 07:30:41 AM AEST
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Sadness follows, but just for a time, and then we move on, remembering not, that last bit of time, that last gasp of breath, because surely you see, the next one will be....the deepest breath of all so far.

Good write, great flow.

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