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Array ( [sid] => 47411 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Petals [time] => 2004-05-13 19:41:06 [hometext] => Some people are so good at suger-coating their empty words. [bodytext] => Your words are like petals,
They're so intoxicating at first,
Yet when the scents fade away,
For affection it desperately thrists.

Your words are like petals,
It divinely captivates the heart,
But when it's grasped between two hands,
It slowly falls apart.

Your words are like petals,
They bloom only for a while,
Yet as time slowly moves on,
It withers out and dies. [comments] => 10 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 64 [informant] => blueheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
Petals

Contributed by blueheart on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:41:06 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



Your words are like petals,
They're so intoxicating at first,
Yet when the scents fade away,
For affection it desperately thrists.

Your words are like petals,
It divinely captivates the heart,
But when it's grasped between two hands,
It slowly falls apart.

Your words are like petals,
They bloom only for a while,
Yet as time slowly moves on,
It withers out and dies.




Copyright © blueheart ... [ 2004-05-13 19:41:06]
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Re: Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:54:27 PM AEST
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You sure got that petal placed right. I have know several people like this.

Rita


Re: Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:58:52 PM AEST
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Oooh, liked the simile muchly . . . great imagery; I especially enjoyed the second stanza.

--Nora


Re: Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by UnfallenTears on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:17:40 PM AEST
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I really like this one. Very well written. Your talent for writing is very obvious here, nice work.


Re: Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:48:35 PM AEST
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This is really nice. I can feel your emotions being poured out in this write. Great work. *S* Cynthia


Re: Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:58:49 PM AEST
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Wow..this could not have been said any better..
I love the analogy used here.... Terrific write.
Jenni


Re: Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:00:50 PM AEST
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Wow Very Good Write !!!!!!! Loved It :-) I've Also Known Alot Of People Like This !!!!!!!!!!!!
*********LoVe**AnGeL***********
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Re: Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:35:03 PM AEST
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good job


Re: Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:02:25 AM AEST
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excellent, hanna, your style, images and deep message; poetry at its finest:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by RobertKilpatrick on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:08:50 AM AEST
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nice: Poem of Petals.. you have captured a word on a wing: lovey write...


Re: Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:47:10 AM AEST
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A amsterpeice of truth unfortunaly at times.
Great writing!
huggs, smiles,
emy




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