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like broken glass Tormenting human
souls like demons from their past
As I walk by him not a sound can be heard
I am silent but deadly like the talons of a bird
Slowly I approach him as he gazes into my eyes
I tell him not to look to deeply for they tell
deceitful lies. Yet he does not
care gazing deep into my soul My body starts
to twitch but yet I maintain control
He slowly walks towards me and his talons touch
my face It is only at this time that he reveals his true race
He slowly bares his fangs, My body get a chill
He then moves towards my neck to make his sweet kill
As I feel him touch me my soul is filled with bliss
Then I bare my fangs and we share this dark kiss
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DARK ~ KISS

Contributed by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:34:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My fangs of ice can pierce your flesh
like broken glass Tormenting human
souls like demons from their past
As I walk by him not a sound can be heard
I am silent but deadly like the talons of a bird
Slowly I approach him as he gazes into my eyes
I tell him not to look to deeply for they tell
deceitful lies. Yet he does not
care gazing deep into my soul My body starts
to twitch but yet I maintain control
He slowly walks towards me and his talons touch
my face It is only at this time that he reveals his true race
He slowly bares his fangs, My body get a chill
He then moves towards my neck to make his sweet kill
As I feel him touch me my soul is filled with bliss
Then I bare my fangs and we share this dark kiss

Copyright © AnGeL_M ... [ 2004-05-13 19:34:16]
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Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:45:49 PM AEST
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o i luv it. it gave me chills. keep up the good work

Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:56:36 PM AEST
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Darkly delightful. This is great, Angel Girl.

Rita

Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:59:06 PM AEST
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Holy crap!!!!! It figures I'd be reading this one a tnight. Thanks alot sis. *being sarcastic* LOL I loved it!!!!! Love you. Great job. *S* Cynthia

Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:01:11 PM AEST
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Niiice . . . chilling and creepy and haunting and shiver-inducing with a really awesome ending-- great write.

--Nora

Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:10:37 PM AEST
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very powerful and chilling......... gotta love those types of kisses :) :) :) haha

Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:31:16 PM AEST
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This was really great Angel, I told you everyone would like it. You have a very great mind, and I love reading your work. Great job babe. Love ya always Ron.

Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:35:26 PM AEST
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Yes I did indeed enjoy it. Brilliant dark write.
I checked out this poem because it was sandwiched between two poems of mine and I'm so glad I did!!! Its awesome, really, good job. :)

Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:38:44 PM AEST
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A DARK KISS LURKS FROM YOUR HEART WITH A HISS! VERY DESCRIPTIVE & WHAT A PICTURE IT PAINTS!! NICELY WRITTEN ANGEL!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!

Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:13:40 PM AEST
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great write.

Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:26:02 PM AEST
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wow that was really good. sure shows how the sweetly beautiful things to some people are just as darkly beautiful to others.

Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:53:42 PM AEST
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I don't remember your black poetry 'Angel M
This one was really spooky even until the end.
I'll have nightmares for sure.
Spooky pen
love
consue

Re: DARK ~ KISS (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:09:20 AM AEST
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oh i love this!! angel! he met his match with you! lmao! hehe hugs n' love nessa

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