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Array ( [sid] => 47393 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So alone [time] => 2004-05-13 18:10:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm cracking up inside
these feelings bottled up inside
I'm lost
and alone
I just want to go home
I want to get away
from the inner workings
of my evil mind
it scares me
the terrifying things
I wish on myself
the terrible things
I think of
I'm scared to even think
of what I might do
to myself
to everybody else
I don't want to hurt anymore
myself
or others
I feel so alone
and cold
like I'm dying
or already dead
I don't want to live this way
with no friends
and a heart colder than stone
wishing I was dead
every waking moment
no one understands
how it feels to be me
to hate yourself
as much as I do
nobody cares
they all just pretend
they wish I was dead
just as much as I do
so I would not
bother them anymore
maybe I'll just give up
there's nothing left to fight for
nothing left to pray for
nothing left to hope for
I'm as good as gone
goodbye... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Alessa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

So alone

Contributed by Alessa on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:10:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm cracking up inside
these feelings bottled up inside
I'm lost
and alone
I just want to go home
I want to get away
from the inner workings
of my evil mind
it scares me
the terrifying things
I wish on myself
the terrible things
I think of
I'm scared to even think
of what I might do
to myself
to everybody else
I don't want to hurt anymore
myself
or others
I feel so alone
and cold
like I'm dying
or already dead
I don't want to live this way
with no friends
and a heart colder than stone
wishing I was dead
every waking moment
no one understands
how it feels to be me
to hate yourself
as much as I do
nobody cares
they all just pretend
they wish I was dead
just as much as I do
so I would not
bother them anymore
maybe I'll just give up
there's nothing left to fight for
nothing left to pray for
nothing left to hope for
I'm as good as gone
goodbye...

Copyright © Alessa ... [ 2004-05-13 18:10:20]
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Re: So alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:30:46 PM AEST
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i too have felt this way before. this is a powerful pice.

Re: So alone (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:56:26 PM AEST
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wow. awesome poem, i feel the same......so alone

Re: So alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:26:34 AM AEST
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Wow thats some heavy stuff. Lets hope you only feel the release on paper coz believe the other is no answer

Whisper

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