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Array ( [sid] => 47389 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blood and pain [time] => 2004-05-13 17:53:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The sting of a blade is
Lost in the greater pain
Constantly felt.
Blood dripping down an
Arm that is part of the
Huge pain that consumes.
With blood running out
Goes the life and the
Intense pain.
The blade slides deeper.
Blood flows faster.
Life is leaving slowly.
As the blade cuts,
Tendons are revealed,
Muscles are shown,
Veins are severed,
The beauty inside is
Revealed to all.
Blood continues to
Drip down to the floor,
Puddling there.
Light shines in the
Red blood.
A face is reflected.
A face that once had
Torment and pain,
Now only has
Peace and serenity. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 36 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Blood and pain

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:53:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The sting of a blade is
Lost in the greater pain
Constantly felt.
Blood dripping down an
Arm that is part of the
Huge pain that consumes.
With blood running out
Goes the life and the
Intense pain.
The blade slides deeper.
Blood flows faster.
Life is leaving slowly.
As the blade cuts,
Tendons are revealed,
Muscles are shown,
Veins are severed,
The beauty inside is
Revealed to all.
Blood continues to
Drip down to the floor,
Puddling there.
Light shines in the
Red blood.
A face is reflected.
A face that once had
Torment and pain,
Now only has
Peace and serenity.

Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2004-05-13 17:53:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Blood and pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:59:58 PM AEST
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This is beautifuly dark and moody. I love this, everything is worded so well. It flows so well, I look forward to your next poem!

Re: Blood and pain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:07:17 PM AEST
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ooooo dark and to be truthful your making my arm hurt woaaaaaaa

Michelle

Re: Blood and pain (User Rating: 1 )
by diamond_tears on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:12:26 PM AEST
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fantastic poem beautifully written. pm me if u need. love jo xxxxxxxxxxxx

Re: Blood and pain (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:45:58 PM AEST
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your a really good poet. keep up the good work.

Re: Blood and pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Delusions on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 02:31:16 AM AEST
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Really good... great imagery... made me shiver!!! Keep em coming ~delusions~

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